The Ring

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I was really getting into the beauty of the poem with such lines as: "The(n) I looked across the meadow
And saw the dewdrops glistening on the grass
Two carat droplets of diamond sparkle. I esp.liked "the two carat droplets of diamond sparkle"
I wasn't expecting that ending after such lovely lines preceding it! You got me! I'll be keeping an eye out for a serious romantic poem by you...you obviously have a wonderful way of phrasing things. Good job. J.

Re: The Ring (Score: 1 ) by mikangel on Thursday, November 19, 2009 (22:31:07)

thank you so much for kind aprisal of my work. as for a serious poem good luck. lol no, i have actually wriiten 1 or 2 serious poems you just havent found them yet. lo
as for my wording and phrasing , most of the credit goes to my tutor, who taught me a whole new way of thinking about words.but i thank you for us both


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I know my comments will never do your lovely poem justice but lovely it is...thank you for sharing..*smiles*

Re: The Ring (Score: 1 ) by mikangel on Friday, November 20, 2009 (05:27:26)

thank you for your comment poetess,
your poems indicate that just by you commenting you are doing mine justice. thank you


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love it "Its beauty unsurpassed"....

Re: The Ring (Score: 1 ) by mikangel on Friday, November 20, 2009 (20:13:06)

zubzir, thank you for the kind words, and the time taken to read my poem. all is appreciated


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