Sweet Sucker
by Unbound

I posted this poem and it didn't reflect even after a few hours and I hadn't saved a copy of it. Jus wrote it out of the blue. SO based on what lil I remembered I made it up again and that is the other poem with the same title. That is the story behind why thr r 2 poems with the same title.... Duh!!! But I am interested to know which one is better....




Colors patched in a patern
On velvetty fragile wings
Now here, soon there
They fly everywhere

One and two and three
There are so many indeed
Blue and white and green
Essence of colors revealed

Enticingly camuoflaged
They love the sweet of flower
Wings bound by freedom
They whiz around the garden

Buttery soft
They soar aloft
Beauty to the eye
Captured in the mind




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