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Poems - Ashamed Murderer
| | Ashamed Murdererby AkiG
To my Unborn Child. Im a Murderer
Lookin at the Star's in the Dark Sky
Wishin I could Fly
Reach U and be Greeted with a Beautiful Smile,
Ur Life Cut Short due to the Lack of My Ability
My Wallet Empty............
At The Time no help 4rm any 1 not a soul
Followin my Shadow
I wanted U
but u were in ur Mothers woom
Now surrounded by walls in empty rooms
I stare my Eyes filled in tears
wishin i could hold u in my arms i swear
I apologise
No more Hidin the Truth
I loved ur Mama Baby
i kinda still do - in memories of wht could have been
My precious Child in my heart I pray
The Almighty gives me The opportunity
" 2 craddle u in my arms, hold ur tiny Hands
And We Play "
I wish ur Georgeous face i could only touch
Im a Murderer I dont knw Much
I dont derserve to live after what i did
I promise wen the day comes
ill accept the punishment wht eva it maybe tht comes my way
Ur Mama's not to Blame
im Responsible 4 all the Shame
She woz innocent And Scared
n Be-sides thats history we need not Re - flare
with all my love
Forgive me my precious Child
Please
Ur Regretful Daddy xx x x x
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I am extremely impre
(Score: 1 )
by Mayah on Saturday, December 27, 2008 (19:08:56) |
I am extremely impressed with this poem… it takes courage and a real man to accept a fault as this one … the character in this poem is worthy of praise for his actions… I’m sure forgiveness has already taken place… Beautifully done… Maya
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I am extremely impre
(Score: 1 )
by AkiG on Thursday, January 01, 2009 (19:45:12) |
Thank you i hope so x
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Wow, this is really
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by pixietude on Tuesday, December 30, 2008 (10:13:53) |
Wow, this is really intense. The content is great a letter to a child that may never be seen. I was compeled by the topic, but the style of writing was a bit distracting. Perhaps some grammar and spelling checking would make it flow more easily. Otherwise very good.
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Wow, this is really
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by AkiG on Thursday, January 01, 2009 (19:44:20) |
Hi Thanks for the comment, i normally write what im thinking at the time and save in text form in my phone. this is why this is little or no attention to grammer as such. It totally original straight from the phone. Thank you very much for your comments much appreciated.
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Re: Ashamed Murderer
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by Zbird on Thursday, October 22, 2009 (12:05:19) |
this is heartfelt but all the typos and spelling errors and use of things like Ur instead of a real word... you are... just detracts. please redo this one using spell check and real words. this could be a very powerful poem.
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