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Do you realize?

by deepali


Cast again
that loving glance,
let me have my fill..
hold me tight
in your arms,
as moving clouds, hold still..

place luscious lips on mine
with love,
shall die, if you refrain..
to drink with you that godly wine
I hope,
in vain again..

that road of yours
is no good one, i'm telling you
for sure..
this narrow path, just next to the brook
is one,
you should endure..

and as you reach it's end, you'll see
a valley full of flowers..
with chirping birds
and thatched roof hut
whose door is left ajar..

this place is where
i plan to stay,
with you, till we suffice..
that fist like hut,
bit red and grey,
called heart, if you realize..







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Re: Do you realize? (Score: 1)
by deepali on Tuesday, August 16, 2011 (09:13:42)
Dear James, thanks so much. i needed that advice, it's precious!!

the narrow path, just next to brook
is the one,
you should endure..

does it sound ok now? please, stay with me, at GP, i'm learning! Thanks again. warm wishes, deepali


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