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Depression (part 2)

by ocuana

It's a self replicating virus and once it's inside us..,
It becomes the unstoppable force

Gotta seal up the spaces, even the loving places..,
The only way to halt its course.

And once you are completely sealed - with nothing of yourself revealed..,
You'll believe you averted disaster.

There's no irony quite so great, that once you've stopped this certain fate..,
You've already made him your master





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Re: Depression (part 2) (Score: 1 )
by maryanns on Sunday, January 01, 2012 (14:51:55)
Painfully true and so well detailed within your poem...
many attempt to describe depression, but your poem brings
us inside to feel the last word sealed.

Very well done, William - Mary Ann

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    Re: Depression (part 2) (Score: 1 )
    by ocuana on Thursday, January 05, 2012 (13:20:46)
    Thanks again Mary Ann.
    I've re-read it a few times and I appreciate your feedback.
    I'm not sure though that it's ever something that could be fully described but maybe we can all express a part of the greater picture (or curse).

    Will x

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Re: Depression (part 2) (Score: 1 )
by wordsmithwannabe on Monday, January 02, 2012 (16:30:22)
love this, especially stanza two, that one hurts...nicely penned, Will.

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    Re: Depression (part 2) (Score: 1 )
    by ocuana on Thursday, January 05, 2012 (13:23:50)
    Thank you.

    I hope you aren't all sealed though Smile

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Re: Depression (part 2) (Score: 1 )
by badmalthus on Wednesday, January 04, 2012 (01:51:31)
Just so perfectly said Will...my brother hanged himself 10 years ago so the poem hit home.
Cheers...Harry

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    Re: Depression (part 2) (Score: 1 )
    by ocuana on Thursday, January 05, 2012 (13:28:53)
    Sometimes we just don't know who will understand or relate to what we write, or feel something we also feel. If it gives insight into anything at all, it was worth typing in the first place, right? Your openness is welcome here Harry. My thoughts and my thanks.

    Will.

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Re: Depression (part 2) (Score: 1 )
by Labyrinth on Thursday, May 23, 2013 (09:12:27)
so so true. well written.

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