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cold

by sidv

im cold

i stopped breathing three hours ago you didnt call your not there when i fall you stopped showing that you cared there are no feelings to share and i guess im just there to fill in space but you wont even let me do that i fuckin hate this throw my heart up and swing at it with your bat it doesnt matter nothing ever really does were all desposable were all pretty fucked up i cant stick out you dont see me your looking past and im past out in the realization that im useless your not dumb your not clueless you know what your doin but you could give a shit less these feelings i half to get off my cheast cuz there pressing in the walls to my room are pressing in my emotions are arresting me the handcuffs are tight wheres my so called lover fuckin not in sight





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interesting poem, wi (Score: 1 )
by Dhincara on Tuesday, November 28, 2006 (09:43:34)
interesting poem, with refreshing layout and a rhyme and rhythm that works. The lack of punctuation makes you have to read it in one breath, intensifying the feeling of anger and frustration. there is a little problem with spelling (were not we're?) and could have a perhps done with proof-read. Well done.

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Re: cold (Score: 1 )
by zhaul on Monday, June 07, 2010 (19:07:56)
prose? poetry or a bunch of words?

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