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Poems - Is freedom curse?

Is freedom curse?

by jadia4708au

Someone politely commented and wrote
Total freedom is unwarranted and joke
It is absolute freedom of expression
One may live till death with this obsession

Freedom is to breathe in free space
No cast, color, creed discrimination in any case
No one to run after you or chase
All deliberation in earnestness in single phase

Curtailment of freedom sometimes may be working favorably
But can’t be taken for granted as it helped you suitably
Some opinion can be experienced in isolation
But it must be ruled out rightly out of question

If some one is put behind bars for some reasons
He may have alternate options as person
How to spend or utilize the time in prison?
Even if hands are not tied with chains

Many may find divine experience in cell
Something to reveal or divinely to tell
Someone may guide from unknown direction
So as to enable and think about right action

Sort out some confusions prevailing in mind
Gentle touch to humanity and solutions to find
As a prisoner behind bars, it pave some opportune time
To think positively and praiseworthy sometimes

Well it can’t be said with many of same truth
Only visionaries forecast and needs no proof
For them may only be needed single roof
As it may be ideal to remain aloof

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Re: Is freedom curse? (Score: 1 )
by jadia4708au on Saturday, September 03, 2011 (05:05:52)

» SUNDAR Many may find divine experience in cell Something to reveal or divinely to tell Someone may guide from unknown direction So as to enable and think about right action =NICE

Send message | Swarnapali Li.. A sensible write! It depends on one's understanding what freedom is

Send message | Williams.P.Pr.. Sometimes it is curse and sometimes it is blessings too.

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Re: Is freedom curse? (Score: 1 )
by angels on Tuesday, September 06, 2011 (19:31:24)

...even the mind/heart holds the body captive...

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