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No stoppage by any one

by jadia4708au

The world is open and field ground
So many opportunities and chances are found
Any chance on the way must be grabbed
Old or youth, child or blind must not be robbed

How long we may take oath under falsehood?
When we have nothing to eat as food?
We have made the earth as hell
What is there now to claim nothing is well?

The Sun was reality, is today and may remain
We must tap the sources and try to gain
What afternoon will help us merely by observing?
When we are lazy, opportunists and not deserving?

Look around, see the trend and wave the hand
You make turn hostile environment as friend
Create lot many places to turn the tide
The horizon and place is open and wide

The world is definitely a place to venture
Dash against odd and secure the tenure
See that earth belt is torn apart and cultivated
All chances for failures are eliminated

I wish it to become level playing field
Each one is having no secured shield
This will prompt them to rise above level
You may realize then that there is no hindrance to excel

Tap the energy and harness it for proper use
See that youth is oriented for all crises to defuse
Go from one end to another one
As sky is the limit and no stoppage by any one





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Re: No stoppage by any one (Score: 1 )
by jadia4708au on Thursday, October 27, 2011 (21:40:37)
seema chowdhury
A nice and a reflective write. your opening lines are very catchy.

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Re: No stoppage by any one (Score: 1 )
by jadia4708au on Thursday, October 27, 2011 (21:48:15)
Daniel Mansfield Well said Smile) we human race ..run too long in the wrong direction.. Nice poem
about an hour ago via mobile · Like

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Re: No stoppage by any one (Score: 1 )
by jadia4708au on Thursday, October 27, 2011 (21:57:57)
ou have in the title this: No Stoppage by Any none. Should I not be, at least, by any one. Another thing that I do not grasp is this: ...and field ground. What comes before this does not goes well with the later.

Also some of the lines read a bit odd in their meaning or what they try to say. Some are fine though.

You made this try less poetic by those error I have high lighted here.

Take care now!

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