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Re: that poem sux (Score: 1 )
by Ilan on Friday, November 04, 2011 (01:07:25)
Asif you have copied the style of my poem
Luv sux and used this to ridicule me in
This

You're not a nice fellow and contrary to
The spirit of GP

Ilan

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    Re: that poem sux (Score: 1 )
    by AsIf on Friday, November 04, 2011 (01:21:07)
    Really?

    I thought the "spirit of GP" was freedom of speech.

    As for me not being "a nice fellow"..you may be correct on that count. So?

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      Re: that poem sux (Score: 1 )
      by AsIf on Friday, November 04, 2011 (01:23:31)
      And since you have an itchy trigger finger, and saw fit to block me..here is my reply to your ridiculous PM (the contents of which I will make public if you send any more such tripe to my inbox)..

      So you are going to tell on me? What are you, twelve?

      By the way..I did not low rate your poem. Someone else must have thought it was as ridiculous as I did.

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        Re: that poem sux (Score: 1 )
        by Ilan on Friday, November 04, 2011 (02:02:13)
        Free speech doesn't mean denigrating
        a fellow poet on GP

        You constantly leave sarcastic remarks
        And I think you're just a child Trying to
        attract attention, how old are you?

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        Re: that poem sux (Score: 1 )
        by Ilan on Friday, November 04, 2011 (03:00:53)
        Lolz I'll make my PM to you public for all to see


        Here's exactly what I sent to your inbox
        Asif

        "Your poem is offensive
        if you do not remove it immediately
        I'll complain about it to the owners of
        GP

        Ilan"

        Read the rules Asif, youre not meant to
        mock other poets works - you can
        constructively put your point across
        but not denigrate

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          Re: that poem sux (Score: 1 )
          by AsIf on Saturday, November 05, 2011 (14:42:50)
          What makes you think I am mocking you? It could be an homage.

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Re: that poem sux (Score: 1 )
by kylebank on Friday, November 04, 2011 (16:50:20)
what a wonderful poem, AsIf! It really speaks volumes about the current state of this world - and to think that someone would rate it a one? There are other poems on this site very similar in style, and they all get rated an eight, or a nine, or even a ten... Maybe you should try adding different languages or alphabets, like Cyrillic.

Honest feedback: the final two lines are my favourite.

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    Re: that poem sux (Score: 1 )
    by AsIf on Saturday, November 05, 2011 (14:40:30)
    Ha ha..I am very appreciative of your appreciation, Mr. Kylebank. Perhaps I will run this through Google translate or wikipedia and add it at the bottom.

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    Re: that poem sux (Score: 1 )
    by electrictiger on Wednesday, November 23, 2011 (22:25:52)
    Kyle, I hate to disagree with you, but I think you overlooked the third to last line. That's the one that's so deeply symbolic and well-expressed. >^__^<

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      Re: that poem sux (Score: 1 )
      by AsIf on Sunday, November 27, 2011 (22:33:40)
      Thanks Mr. Cat. That line took a few days and multiple edits to get it just right.

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Re: that poem sux (Score: 1 )
by electrictiger on Wednesday, November 23, 2011 (20:05:18)
What's good for the goose is good for the gander.

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    Re: that poem sux (Score: 1 )
    by Humanicide on Wednesday, November 30, 2011 (01:49:48)
    I agree with Kyle and ET here, but for some reason, the title just doesn't seem to be related to the content.

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