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fortnights in the abyss

by drunkpunkbob

Tossed down into the griping darkness,Stuck inside,
This seemingly endless abyss,Clinging to shadows,
That quickly recede, What here had planted,
Fears forever growing seed, Walking worlds under,
Feeling much like the mouse,Roaming many fortnights,
Through this giant slaughterhouse,Tortured souls all around,
Some searchingfor an excape, That can never be found,
Everyone here is demonic in their own right, Am I to judge,
Someday hiding shall not suffice, And I may be forced to fight,
I can not loose sight.

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Re: fortnights in the abyss (Score: 1 )
by Phoebe on Monday, November 14, 2011 (22:20:11)
I love the darkness of your writing and am getting use to your poem structure too - well done Bob:)-Phoebe

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    Re: fortnights in the abyss (Score: 1 )
    by drunkpunkbob on Tuesday, November 15, 2011 (00:13:29)
    thank you for the comment im glad you liked it

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