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Christmas Tunes

by ossy

Sweet sounds in the air,
on the wings of the season
bring joys to my soul.




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Re: Christmas Tunes (Score: 1 )
by WHMechem on Monday, December 05, 2011 (00:46:24)
I like LL 1 & 3. " wings of the season" ( L2) needs editing.

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    Re: Christmas Tunes (Score: 1 )
    by ossy on Tuesday, December 06, 2011 (11:00:45)
    How about "from the season's violin" what do you think will

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Re: Christmas Tunes (Score: 1 )
by Pujakins on Sunday, December 18, 2011 (18:32:18)
Hi Ossy, I don't have any problem with the wings, they too make sounds. However, strings is a bit ambiguous. You could also say, the music of the season, brings etc. Good to see you here again! warmly, Tasha

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    Re: Christmas Tunes (Score: 1 )
    by ossy on Monday, December 19, 2011 (21:22:11)
    Thanks Tasha. It's good to be back. The music of the season sounds great but I'd prefer a metaphor or simile that links L1 and L3 without much ambiguity like you said because I felt uneasy wit wings just as Will pointed out.

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