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Ins And Outs

by Phoebe

Inside each past one leaves
-a tragedy
Into the future one takes
-a memory
Whatever happens, happens
This is the reality but!..
- out of the living of life itself
Whatever will be, will be!

Out of so many things there grows
-a chance to review
Out of eternal hope there springs
-a chance to renew
Whatever happens, happens
This is very true but!...
- out of the living of life itself
The one in charge is you!

~Phoebe~





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Re: Ins And Outs (Score: 1 )
by FuchsiaFestival! on Sunday, December 04, 2011 (03:16:09)
Beautiful, well put. Inspirational as well.

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    Re: Ins And Outs (Score: 1 )
    by Phoebe on Sunday, December 04, 2011 (05:40:03)
    Thank you Fuchsia, doesn't happen often but every now and then my mental (thoughts) connects with my physical (fingers) and a poem is born Smile-Phoebe

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Re: Ins And Outs (Score: 1 )
by Essex68 on Sunday, December 04, 2011 (23:31:42)
I can't put into words why I like this one Phoebe.

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    Re: Ins And Outs (Score: 1 )
    by Phoebe on Monday, December 05, 2011 (02:28:01)
    That you like it is all there is - I always appreciate your dropping by and you always have incredibly great taste:) - Phoebe Laughing

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Re: Ins And Outs (Score: 1 )
by deepali on Monday, December 05, 2011 (08:39:26)
love the way you've done magic with words!!
D.

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    Re: Ins And Outs (Score: 1 )
    by Phoebe on Monday, December 05, 2011 (16:55:53)
    Thank you my lovely friend - we are all word weaver magicians I think...I appreciate your comments always - be well..Smile-Phoebe

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Re: Ins And Outs (Score: 1 )
by rondo on Monday, December 05, 2011 (10:50:12)
wisdom in rhyme .....my favorite kind....great work pheobe

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    Re: Ins And Outs (Score: 1 )
    by Phoebe on Monday, December 05, 2011 (16:54:06)
    Hi Rondo. missed seeing your hot little avatar around and thank you again for your comment - I really enjoy philosophising poetically - glad you enjoyed reading it..Smile-Phoebe

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Re: Ins And Outs (Score: 1 )
by omegapaf on Friday, December 09, 2011 (11:06:26)
starts out with a very fate like attitude. like we are just dust in the wind. but as the poem progresses, it moves on to the fact that someone can change their own life anytime they want to. by simply acting differently - complicated poem phoebe kiwi. i had to read it three times - paul.

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    Re: Ins And Outs (Score: 1 )
    by Phoebe on Sunday, December 11, 2011 (00:22:28)
    I have deep moments when I can see with amazing clarity a profound truth - well at least that's what I think it is - thanks Paul:)-Phoebe

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Re: Ins And Outs (Score: 1 )
by Dreaming-Demon on Friday, December 09, 2011 (11:18:03)
amazing piece my friend, well done

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    Re: Ins And Outs (Score: 1 )
    by Phoebe on Sunday, December 11, 2011 (00:23:09)
    Thank you very much Dreaming and I hope all goes well with you:)-Phoebe

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Re: Ins And Outs (Score: 1 )
by TygerTyger on Monday, December 12, 2011 (20:43:14)
so love this. your an inspiration. very well written. well done. a 10 and a heart at least. Pete. LOL .

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    Re: Ins And Outs (Score: 1 )
    by Phoebe on Monday, December 12, 2011 (21:08:20)
    And again, thank you very much for yiour generous spirit and lovely comments:)-Phoebe

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      Re: Ins And Outs (Score: 1 )
      by TygerTyger on Wednesday, December 14, 2011 (18:26:29)
      it's a real pleasure, I love your work. Best wishes. Pete. LOL .

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Re: Ins And Outs (Score: 1 )
by themaze on Thursday, December 15, 2011 (03:53:06)
Classic

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    Re: Ins And Outs (Score: 1 )
    by Phoebe on Thursday, December 15, 2011 (12:48:14)
    Thank you:)-Phoebe

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