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Poems - Pretend Clown

Pretend Clown

by lologerad

Keep quite
Head down
Don't speak
Frown
Smile
Pretend clown
Keep quite
Don't laugh
Freeze
Photograph
Don't move
Disprove
Keep quite
Don't argue
Keep it bottled up
Coverup
Walk past fast
Blast
Not to loud
Be in the crowd
That's allowed
Don't care
Despair
Buy rope
Tie it Tight
On top of chair
Now fall
Feet hanging
Soul underground
Keep quite
Keep quite
Head down
Head down

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Re: Pretend Clown (Score: 1 )
by MoZark on Monday, December 05, 2011 (09:17:45)

So many exist in the fringes of society. Their personalities clash, leaving them alone within them selves, and there are those just the opposite and they too, to often end as your poem. Your guess and mind is as good as any. Thank for the early morning stimulation.
Have a grand tomorrow…Jack

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Re: Pretend Clown (Score: 1 )
by anna9 on Tuesday, December 06, 2011 (00:31:36)

good poem, great pace, there is a typo though

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Re: Pretend Clown (Score: 1 )
by lologerad on Tuesday, December 06, 2011 (01:38:11)

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Re: Pretend Clown (Score: 1 )
by maryanns on Tuesday, December 20, 2011 (16:23:14)

Another one... LOL! (at poem, not you) ...
with or without edit(s), great swipe
at life's major annoyances.

Free spirited; quite enjoyed!

Cheers of welcome, Mary Ann

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Re: Pretend Clown (Score: 1 )
by lologerad on Monday, December 26, 2011 (01:17:56)

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Re: Pretend Clown (Score: 1 )
by TygerTyger on Monday, December 26, 2011 (08:31:05)

Another incredible write. It flows so well nice rhythm. great style and perspective. what do typos matter, i can't spel. but it's the poem that is important. we cant all be perfect. not sure about the hanging bit. you have a great style like it. thanks for sharing. take care. pete. lol .

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