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Poems - Onyx Perception


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Onyx Perception

by FuchsiaFestival!

Onyx eyes unfurl at the wisp
of harmony dashing through
minds filled with burning stars
in the corridors of light.

Their pupils utilize the sun
with Utopian-related passions
just to justify the dawn
with crystallized sin.

They are connected by paint
sprayed into their bloodstreams;
desires wrapped thoroughly
around striking onyx eyes.

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Re: Onyx Perception (Score: 1 )
by butterflyzrfree on Monday, December 05, 2011 (06:18:59)
This, a striking onyx poem!!!!! spellbingly good story sammi. love.

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Re: Onyx Perception (Score: 1 )
by badmalthus on Monday, December 05, 2011 (20:30:49)
Very nice indeed Sammi.

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Re: Onyx Perception (Score: 1 )
by Pujakins on Monday, December 05, 2011 (21:28:35)
Vivid, reminds me of a flower for some reason, an exotic one that grows in the jungle somewhere and attracts wonderful insects to itself. You're always such fun to read. Warmly, with a hug, Tasha

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    Re: Onyx Perception (Score: 1 )
    by FuchsiaFestival! on Monday, December 05, 2011 (21:33:00)
    Thank you. I like anything floral, I like anything gemstone....and I like colors! I think they go together very well. Wink

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Re: Onyx Perception (Score: 1 )
by Loki on Saturday, December 10, 2011 (00:57:02)
Thay are all connected, as they all draw the eye with beautiful detail, much like your poetry does to the minds eye Sammi Wink , lovely poem.

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    Re: Onyx Perception (Score: 1 )
    by FuchsiaFestival! on Saturday, December 10, 2011 (00:58:00)
    Thank you: I'm glad you enjoyed it. This is very important to me.

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Re: Onyx Perception (Score: 1 )
by kylebank on Wednesday, December 14, 2011 (20:45:16)
Great poem, sammi, so very vivid!

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    Re: Onyx Perception (Score: 1 )
    by FuchsiaFestival! on Thursday, December 15, 2011 (03:44:43)
    Thank you! I appreciate this, a lot!

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