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Poems - If I Were A Woman
......... makes one appreciate what they have.
In my experience, most guys have had this thought - usually in the 7th grade or so. And some of us spend more time thinking about it than others. But everyone I've ever talked to about it has come to the same conclusion - we would stay home and explore our new bodies. But I don't necessarily think it's a sexual thing (or not entirely). As a gay man, I haven't thought about a woman sexually since well before the 7th grade, and I've still had this daydream, numerous times. It's just about exploring the mystery, I think.
AsIf, I give you full props for deftly expressing such a common, secretive thought!
I'd sure like to try it and see what it's worth,
but not if I had to endure childbirth!
It seems the quote "how typical" is popular. But in my opinion typical may be true, but honest is as well. Very clever and honest. I know you put this in the finished section, but I do believe that breaking it up to emphasize the rhyming couplet would be nice. Sort of a play on the purity of the Shakspearian style.
On a completely unrelated topic, why Perry The Platypus?
Perry The Platypus, a.k.a. Agent P, is just cool. And it was either him or Dr. Doofenshmirtz.
I got lots of laughs from this. I enjoyed reading your 'secret desires' in thispoem.
You would start touching. Get overwhelmed. And fall asleep!
Added on: 08-Dec-2011 | Hits: 469 |
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