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A Powerful Premonition

by Phoebe

I need a shoulder to cry on please.
I don’t know what else I can do..

I’m trying so hard to hold it together
But sadly tears keep breaking through

I promised myself if this ever happened
I’d be cool and control any stress

But now that it’s going to happen you see..
I’m a quivering, blubbering mess

There's only one thing can prepare me for this
That’s to go out and get myself blotto

I really believe, on this New Year's Eve .
I'll be winning the National Lotto!?


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Re: A Powerful Premonition (Score: 1 )
by sedubah on Thursday, December 29, 2011 (11:47:26)
good for you!

Live long and prosper

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    Re: A Powerful Premonition (Score: 1 )
    by Phoebe on Thursday, December 29, 2011 (12:28:52)
    Truthfully, I had a dream and in my dream I was holding the winning ticket - thank you very much but what would one do with so much money?...Smile-Phoebe

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      Re: A Powerful Premonition (Score: 1 )
      by sedubah on Friday, December 30, 2011 (09:06:14)
      One might.....

      ... dream a little bigger

      and know that if money
      is what it takes to achieve your dreams
      you'll have the means

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Re: A Powerful Premonition (Score: 1 )
by rondo on Thursday, December 29, 2011 (23:56:20)
the last couplet contrast...the preceeding 5 i'm feeling the pain and then a burst of optomism and I'm better interesting write.....peace

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    Re: A Powerful Premonition (Score: 1 )
    by Phoebe on Friday, December 30, 2011 (04:40:11)
    This is totally not how it started out but it just found its own way all I need to do is..BELIEVE!! BELIEVE!!.. Laughing Laughing

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Re: A Powerful Premonition (Score: 1 )
by omegapaf on Friday, December 30, 2011 (21:48:36)
got your shoulder right here phoebe.
the winning numbers are 4 12 32 6 18 and 22.....but according to douglas adams the answer to life, the universe and everything is 42.....we'll see - paul and the number 42 hound.

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