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Are you still waiting?

by AndreyFisht

Are you still waiting?
Are you still waiting for me?
Are you still thinking?
Are you still thinking of me?
***
I kept your eyes in memory,
I kept my paradise,
I never had a query-
You are my best Sunrise!
***
I've got my mind on you,
I painted Heavens of Blue,
I created person of fancy,
I thought the story was true.
***
But it seems to me again,
I never knew your Star,
Maybe imagine in vain,
Mysterious and beautiful Love.
***
Are you still waiting?
Are you still waiting for me?
Are you still thinking?
Are you still thinking of me?
© Copyright:Andrey Fisht





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Re: Are you still waiting? (Score: 1 )
by TygerTyger on Monday, January 09, 2012 (19:03:42)
Beautiful Andrey. Well done. A 10 and a hearty. pete. lol .

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    Re: Are you still waiting? (Score: 1 )
    by AndreyFisht on Tuesday, January 10, 2012 (07:50:41)
    Thank you,Pete,always glad to see your kind comments.Smile

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Re: Are you still waiting? (Score: 1 )
by kenmoorecowboypoet on Tuesday, January 10, 2012 (14:55:19)
This was done with some heart, some thoughtfulness of inquire 'n' wonderment fer possibility or certainty kinda covers the realm of interpretation. Nicely done.

wabl
KenMoore
cowboypoet

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    Re: Are you still waiting? (Score: 1 )
    by AndreyFisht on Wednesday, January 11, 2012 (05:52:15)
    Thanks,Ken for deep and interesting comment,keep up visiting.

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Re: Are you still waiting? (Score: 1 )
by MoZark on Tuesday, January 10, 2012 (19:45:49)
I get a picture of a soldier wondering if his girl back home is still true.
A lament of not knowing. Have a grand tomorrow…Jack

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    Re: Are you still waiting? (Score: 1 )
    by AndreyFisht on Wednesday, January 11, 2012 (05:42:06)
    You're right,Jack,in a kind of way there is an image of lament,and it would be possible to imagine different images.

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