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If Only

by Phoebe

If life were perfect
There would be no prejudice
In an ideal world

Quality living
A global community
In sweet harmony

Enjoying the fruits
from a global harvest of
Universal love

But life's not like that
And the reason why it's not..
We already know!

~Phoebe~




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Re: If Only (Score: 1 )
by maryanns on Wednesday, January 11, 2012 (13:54:51)
Ah, love your quartet of ku's ... What one wouldn't give for the true serenity (and good vibes) of "quality living, a global community in sweet harmony" - Sigh, Phoebe... Really well done!
Cheers, Mary Ann

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    Re: If Only (Score: 1 )
    by Phoebe on Wednesday, January 11, 2012 (14:00:29)
    Hi Mary Ann, thank you for your awesome comments and yes!, I know your passion for global harmony too..it's reflected in your lovely poetry...be well...Smile-Phoebe

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Re: If Only (Score: 1 )
by omegapaf on Saturday, January 14, 2012 (09:31:39)
if life was perfect....we wouldn't need to write poetry....nice one little kiwi - paul and the perfect pup.

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    Re: If Only (Score: 1 )
    by Phoebe on Saturday, January 14, 2012 (16:28:58)
    Thank you Paul and Missy Perfect....to quote a quote...I'm nobody, and nobody's perfect!...Smile-Phoebe

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Re: If Only (Score: 1 )
by deepali on Sunday, January 15, 2012 (04:52:48)
Beautifully said, dear Phoebe!
love your quote, "i'm nobody...and nobody's perfect" Smile
lots of love,
D.

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    Re: If Only (Score: 1 )
    by Phoebe on Sunday, January 15, 2012 (06:07:38)
    Thank you sweet friend...Smile-Phoebe

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Re: If Only (Score: 1 )
by rondo on Monday, January 16, 2012 (10:46:39)
is the selfishness

and greed of the one percent

blind to true fairness


nice set of ku's you....peace

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    Re: If Only (Score: 1 )
    by Phoebe on Monday, January 16, 2012 (15:37:35)
    Thank you sir...I love this form of poetry..Smile-Phoebe

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Re: If Only (Score: 1 )
by starstruck13 on Sunday, January 29, 2012 (17:23:08)
a good write i feel it came from within your heart and i too wish life to be so gentle

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    Re: If Only (Score: 1 )
    by Phoebe on Sunday, January 29, 2012 (19:00:14)
    When we seriously think about it - it's not really such a big ask is it Star?....how difficult is it for anyone with a functioning brain to be nice to whoever crosses their path...one may pick a hole in my argument and bring up a negative connection that won't be nice back - but negativity has an opposite - I like it much better, there!..Thank you for your comment - much appreciated..Smile - Phoebe

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