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Poems - Manuscript

Manuscript

by silent_lotus

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Tags: manuscript, poetry, editor, red ink, circumcision, editorial, yoga, love, typography, art,

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Re: Manuscript (Score: 1 )
by Leggolas on Sunday, January 15, 2012 (14:50:13)

Ah! such a wicked, poignant and perhaps thoroughly deserved thought my friend. Fond Regards. Mark.

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Re: Manuscript (Score: 1 )
by silent_lotus on Sunday, January 15, 2012 (14:55:30)

dear Mark

it is a delight to find you here
and i am grateful for the kindness
of your words

may the new year award you
with the prosperity of an ongoing
creative flow.

a warm smile
silent lotus

`

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Re: Manuscript (Score: 1 )
by maryanns on Sunday, January 15, 2012 (14:55:44)

Oh my... evokes a visceral reaction.
Nodding and smiling, Mary Ann

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Re: Manuscript (Score: 1 )
by silent_lotus on Monday, February 06, 2012 (12:01:30)

dear Mary Ann

i am grateful for you visit
and your provocative reply

miles of smiles
silent lotus

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Re: Manuscript (Score: 1 )
by badmalthus on Monday, January 16, 2012 (00:35:52)

Give me a second to stop laughing...still laughing...
Peace & Laughter Lotus,
Harry

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Re: Manuscript (Score: 1 )
by silent_lotus on Sunday, January 22, 2012 (13:11:56)

dear Harry

i've been enjoying your laughter
for a week now !

many many thanyuuus

silent lotus

`

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Re: Manuscript (Score: 1 )
by butterflyzrfree on Monday, January 16, 2012 (02:18:57)

Never knew you had the sneaky in you!!!!!

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Re: Manuscript (Score: 1 )
by silent_lotus on Monday, January 16, 2012 (09:37:12)

dear Butterflyz

first let me wish you a wonderful new year.

the core of the poem is the psychology of transference.

and here it is working in two directions from the editor to the author
and again from the author to the editor.

and portrays the challenge for these kinds of circles to be healed

depth and surface are so mysteriously interfaced
like the essence of laughter and tears

a warm smile
silent lotus

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Re: Manuscript (Score: 1 )
by kenmoorecowboypoet on Monday, January 16, 2012 (11:47:48)

The depth, seeming gentleness 'n' power of so few words indicates a depth, genuine gentleness 'n' power of the author. Editors beware of yer red ink arrogance or ... insensitivity. We can take our manuscripts to elsewhere editors Smile

with some brains. Absolute mastery here.

wabl
kenmoore
cowboypoet

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Re: Manuscript (Score: 1 )
by silent_lotus on Sunday, January 22, 2012 (11:04:24)

dear Cowboy

i am truly grateful for your having created
the opportunity to be kind enough to share
your heart felt words ,

please know they have been
very warmly received

smiles
silent lotus

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