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Will Balance One Day!

by Phoebe

Monetary gain
For self gratification
A big, fat zero

Monetary loss
Caused by self stupidity
A zero hero

Monetary gift
Unselfish and generous
The peoples hero

~Phoebe~





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Re: Will Balance One Day! (Score: 1 )
by maryanns on Saturday, January 21, 2012 (21:05:05)
Cool hand haiku... none of that hot-blooded wrath rant stuff
- rather, balance restored! Cheers, m'dear... Mary Ann xoxo

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    Re: Will Balance One Day! (Score: 1 )
    by Phoebe on Monday, January 23, 2012 (09:09:16)
    Thank you Mary Ann, quite a fun poetry structure to work with isn't it?..Smile - Phoebe

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Re: Will Balance One Day! (Score: 1 )
by badmalthus on Sunday, January 22, 2012 (22:35:55)
Three little senryu all in a row...very nice indeed Phoebe.
Peace & Laughter...Harry

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    Re: Will Balance One Day! (Score: 1 )
    by Phoebe on Monday, January 23, 2012 (09:06:51)
    Amazing what comes out of lazy thoughts isn't it Harry?...thank you..Smile-Phoebe

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Re: Will Balance One Day! (Score: 1 )
by angeroseblue on Monday, January 23, 2012 (10:00:14)
been wanting to read some of your work!
and u did not disappoint

why does Robin Hood come to mind

enjoyed!

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    Re: Will Balance One Day! (Score: 1 )
    by Phoebe on Friday, January 27, 2012 (12:34:03)
    Thank you Angerose for your comment it is much appreciated and I must admit your poetry is unforgettable - lots of naughty things come to mind there..hehehe..Smile -Phoebe

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      Re: Will Balance One Day! (Score: 1 )
      by angeroseblue on Wednesday, March 14, 2012 (00:59:15)
      Embarassed aww shucks

      and you are so welcome Wink

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Re: Will Balance One Day! (Score: 1 )
by kenmoorecowboypoet on Wednesday, January 25, 2012 (13:21:43)
Powerful statement in 17 X 3 syllables X 1500 words in each haiku/senryu verse = a forty-five hundred word essay on a monetary gift. World, we need a people's hero. Nice work, Phoebe-Phoebe,

wabl
kenmoore
cowboypoet

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    Re: Will Balance One Day! (Score: 1 )
    by Phoebe on Friday, January 27, 2012 (12:37:09)
    Not only is your poetry fabulous your comments are poetic in their own right - hugs and many thanks...you're not a reincarnation of my favourite physicist/philosopher Einstein are you?..Smile - Phoebe

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Re: Will Balance One Day! (Score: 1 )
by starstruck13 on Friday, January 27, 2012 (09:03:58)
a good poem i liked it very much

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    Re: Will Balance One Day! (Score: 1 )
    by Phoebe on Friday, January 27, 2012 (12:38:08)
    I'm happy you enjoyed it my friend - thank you..Smile - Phoebe

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Re: Will Balance One Day! (Score: 1 )
by rondo on Sunday, February 05, 2012 (00:07:04)
a great social write Very Happy

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    Re: Will Balance One Day! (Score: 1 )
    by Phoebe on Sunday, February 05, 2012 (17:59:29)
    Yep, even I can tap an angry toe on occasion Laughing thank you again buddy..Smile - Phoebe

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