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Poems - Touché

Touché

by AsIf

Reality met Fantasy,
and said, "there's some of me in you-
but you're a falsehood, patently,
and never destined to be true!"

Then Fantasy replied in kind,
"and that's the way it ought to be!
For why do people feel inclined
to flee from you, and run to me?"

2012 AsIf

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Re: Touché (Score: 1 )
by radical_love on Tuesday, January 31, 2012 (20:58:57)

Love it! a conversation between reality and fantasy, its quirky and makes sense to me! Think that the title also gives this poem an extra little kick. really love your style or writing. keep up the good work!
adios, millie aka radical

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Re: Touché (Score: 1 )
by rondo on Wednesday, February 22, 2012 (13:48:12)

great write here clever and thought provoking

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Re: Touché (Score: 1 )
by Zbird on Wednesday, May 02, 2012 (08:07:24)

oh yes! this is super! and very very true Smile

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