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Morning doubts

by T.E.D

He walked around with his head submerged in doubts,
About the coming tomorrow.
Listening to the ‘leaves of grass’ shedding
Tears in the morning sorrow.

Without a glance, he changed his stance
To resemble the clouds flying afar.
Feeling anon, with his head on stone,
Turned up to gaze at a falling star.

Tears in his eyes, his legs frozen and cold,
His heart covered in a mannequin fold.
What could it be, his longing for sanity,
An unrequited dream? A passing fantasy?





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Re: Morning doubts (Score: 1 )
by Phoebe on Thursday, February 16, 2012 (13:41:28)
I'm still absorbing this, but there's something about it I like..Smile-Phoebe

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    Re: Morning doubts (Score: 1 )
    by T.E.D on Sunday, February 19, 2012 (03:20:15)
    Smile

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Re: Morning doubts (Score: 1 )
by tommyjacksprat on Thursday, February 16, 2012 (18:24:13)
A surreal journey through your
pen and poetic mind T.E.D. I
enjoyed this write. tom

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    Re: Morning doubts (Score: 1 )
    by T.E.D on Sunday, February 19, 2012 (03:23:53)
    Thanks Tom .. Smile .

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Re: Morning doubts (Score: 1 )
by MoZark on Thursday, February 16, 2012 (21:38:59)
Me too! Wink

Have a grand tomorrow…Jack

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    Re: Morning doubts (Score: 1 )
    by T.E.D on Sunday, February 19, 2012 (03:22:06)
    glad u enjoyed it .. Smile

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