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Passion's Reply

by Mr_Charles

You asked for it gently
I cannot oblige.
The heat that you feel is flaming desire.

Hold on to something
it’s going to be rough.
The noise up the street it’s probably us.

Begging for mercy
will do you no good
You got me excited and harder than wood.

I’d whisper sweet words
But you’d interrupt
Constantly telling me not to get up

Your wish has been granted
and you’re satisfied
The way you were screaming the look in your eyes.

I wanted you badly
obsessed with your need
Next time I’ll be gentle like we had agreed.





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Re: Passion's Reply (Score: 1 )
by flowergirl on Friday, February 17, 2012 (02:37:36)
Rough in a gentle way, like the mix. Good job. Very Happy

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    Re: Passion's Reply (Score: 1 )
    by Mr_Charles on Friday, February 17, 2012 (12:22:13)
    Wonderful of you to stop by Gail. I'm glad you liked the poem. thank you for reading.

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Re: Passion's Reply (Score: 1 )
by tommyjacksprat on Friday, February 17, 2012 (16:37:02)
A rather honoest self-percetion
Mr. Charles. You did it with nice
rhyming and clear intent. tom

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    Re: Passion's Reply (Score: 1 )
    by Mr_Charles on Friday, February 17, 2012 (20:39:07)
    Thank you Tommy. Not quite like your style but the way you placed the line ' When lustful need met love's desire. ' in your poem "Love's Desire" was very rhyming. I will be stopping by more often to read your poems sir. Thank you for reading. I'm glad you liked it.

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