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Saturday Afternoon.

by NikeAGoGo

It is 12:15 pm we are still in bed.
Tucked under the safety
of our thick red comforter
the warm scent
of chestnuts and titine no. 9,
finds a home within my pores.
I breathe you in,
thinking about our first summer
in the Castle IN THE SAND HOTEL.
 
Brown fur puffs the air as Diesel pounces on your belly. His purr twirls and hums as he curls between us.
The sun peaks and you rub your eyes twice, smearing an eyelash across your salt and pepper beard.
“hey, Diesel kitty” He seems to smile, though one can never be certain about these things. But, your eyes grin at me and I know, he is a little boy, our little boy.
You ask him, if he wants to make some coffee. It is, after all, 12:40 on a Saturday afternoon.





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Re: Saturday Afternoon. (Score: 1 )
by electrictiger on Monday, February 27, 2012 (17:25:11)
So much and so little happens in 25 minutes. It's also a great portrait of affection and the transience that underlies everything in our lives.

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    Re: Saturday Afternoon. (Score: 1 )
    by Lyla on Thursday, March 29, 2012 (08:30:47)
    Thank you so much!

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Re: Saturday Afternoon. (Score: 1 )
by wolfinwindow on Tuesday, May 29, 2012 (01:11:30)
This sounds like a great Saturday afternoon. And I enjoy the little eye Tickler you chose for your form. Smooth....

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    Re: Saturday Afternoon. (Score: 1 )
    by Lyla on Tuesday, May 29, 2012 (19:25:49)
    Thank you, I am a big Frank O' hara fan, so I decided to essentially follow his format, but to add a sentimental quality in order to make it my own. I've also been really getting into mindfulness and living in the moment, so it seemed like using this style to describe the moment worked.. Glad you enjoyed it Smile

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