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The Lost Angel

by sportytrackgirl

You don't see what I see
Because I can foresee
You're going to be drowning in sea

A naked abyss
I can't even save you with a kiss
You're going to fall off a cliff

See I've been there
And I'd like you to be prepared
And fully aware

It's a downward spiral
It's viral
And final

It becomes the end of what you know
You let go
And you can't show

Your emotions
There's an implosion
And some erosion

So to every one I love
I can't let you become
What I can't rise above

Because I'm putting up a fight
And I can't see the light
But I want to be alright

I can't let that be you
To go askew
I need you to be you

Not someone gone
Who doesn't see how its wrong
I need you to be strong

Because I need a knight
To show me the light
So I can be alright

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Re: The Lost Angel (Score: 1 )
by flowergirl on Friday, February 24, 2012 (12:40:45)
This is great!!!! it smooth to read, and like the rhyme you used to set the flow. It is romatic and sad at the sametime. I felt like you are tring to reach someones love, at the sametime telling that person what you need from them. Love this!! Very Happy 10 & hrt

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Re: The Lost Angel (Score: 1 )
by Zbird on Saturday, February 25, 2012 (09:57:40)
I like the rhyming scheme of this one and especially like the verse..

It's a downward spiral
It's viral
And final

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Re: The Lost Angel (Score: 1 )
by sportytrackgirl on Friday, March 16, 2012 (13:39:46)
Thank you Smile

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