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Blue Lagoon

by sportytrackgirl

My days were blue
Because you bid me adieu
And you can't spell us without you

Cause if I had my way
You wouldn't have gone away
And I wouldn't be in disarray

Now you want me back
But we're cracked
And we'll never be able to adapt

To this new found love
Your hand will never fit like a glove
And with you I'll never be able to fly like a dove

Cause at one time it got rough
It became tough
And you said, "I've had enough"

So here we are
You put up your guard
And I can't even find you with sonar

12/27/11





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Re: Blue Lagoon (Score: 1 )
by Zbird on Saturday, February 25, 2012 (10:42:59)
very sad and depressing place to be. I loved the line and you can't spell us without you. great line!

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