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Eye of Love

by sportytrackgirl

I don't know if this is style, but I intended fir the poem to be read two different ways, read it strait through, like line 1, 2, 3, 4...ect, or read lines 1, 4, 7, then 2, 5, 8, then 3, 6, and 9. Hope that's not too confusing.

I want to go to bed in your clothes
____I want to disclose
________I'm going to be exposed

To fall asleep in your arms
____I'm under your charms
________I'm unarmed

And to wake up next to you
____I knew
________And I have to thank you

1/6/12





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Re: Eye of Love (Score: 1 )
by Zbird on Saturday, February 25, 2012 (10:39:18)
wow! no it wasn't too confusing! I found it a wonderful powerful read and read it in all the ways intended. this is an interesting and unique form and I always appreciate both of those qualities.

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    Re: Eye of Love (Score: 1 )
    by sportytrackgirl on Sunday, February 26, 2012 (02:30:36)
    Thanks again Smile

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Re: Eye of Love (Score: 1 )
by kwal123 on Thursday, September 18, 2014 (08:57:03)
you accomplished your goal and wrote a really great poem... or should I say four great poems in the process

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