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His name

by jadia4708au

I hear a loud voice in morning “Allah Akbar”
It is heard across the town and even very far
I come out from the bed and look at the bright star
Same glittering and light even placed among small stars

What a pleasant morning to feel with his name!
One may wonder with the little thought “from where he came”
It is time to bow head and offer earnest prayers
Then to prepare for other activities as players

Why other religious places too lag behind?
Same meaning but with different slogan to find
Remember almighty for his graceful act
Owe everything to him for this known fact

O lord Ram or Allah Akbar I honestly swear
I am not afraid from life but have only one fear
Never subject us to feel pain and shed the tears
Only bless us each morning for your name to hear

Even if we are fast asleep you repeat the same cycle
Come out from your vault and make the full circle
Da

y and night take place and make beautiful round
Where on earth human beings find it around!

Kindness emerge all of sudden whenever I see at the cross
Force me to think twice whether life was not at total loss
Did I perform any act that can be detrimental to my faith?
What will I answer when I shall see thou after the death?

I open the eyes gracefully and thank almighty
What a day to enjoy and feel with simple beauty!
Everywhere to see colorful birds and enjoy melody
Endeavour to feel “he belongs to all and not to somebody”

It is time to start with day’s routine
Duties and rights both combine
It may be only option to feel fine
As his presence is very much divine

* Lord Ram.. Worshipped by Hindu*
*Allaho Akbar……. BY Muslims*





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Re: His name (Score: 1 )
by jadia4708au on Sunday, February 19, 2012 (01:04:42)
Jignasa Shukla wow...wow...wow... Believe me I am fan of your writing... I always love to read you... Sir, you are really great... have you published any poem book of you...? If yes, I would like to read it...
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Re: His name (Score: 1 )
by jadia4708au on Sunday, February 19, 2012 (03:41:43)
Kolil Ahmed Allah is very kind.
2 hours ago via mobile · Unlike · 1

Feroz Pathan Very Nice Lines.
2 hours ago via mobile · Unlike · 1

Kolil Ahmed I love allah n rasul {sm}
about an hour ago via mobile

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Re: His name (Score: 1 )
by Iridium on Sunday, February 19, 2012 (11:23:41)
This poem has many beautiful descriptions in it....I am not a fan of rhyming poetry but if you are going to do it, I think that you should count syllables so that all your stanzas match each other. Very well done indeed, nonetheless.

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    Re: His name (Score: 1 )
    by jadia4708au on Sunday, February 19, 2012 (17:42:44)
    i do rhyming without counting anything.. on the spot preparation and true to subject. i dis almost 3000 pieces. it gives me joy and closeness..

    it is nice to find your observation.. regards n do visit often

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      Re: His name (Score: 1 )
      by Iridium on Sunday, February 19, 2012 (18:53:58)
      I can tell that your writing brings you joy, keep doing it.

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