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Dreams of You

by Mr_Charles

Lying in a field of love
I dreamed about the two of us.
It felt so real the love I feel
I did not make this up.

I called your name and you appeared
adorned in love so precious
I held you gently in my arms
read poems with flowing verses.

You touched my mouth with sinuous lips
I never had such sweetness
Serenity engulfed our love
with absolute completeness.

You look at me with loving eyes
and fade into a mist
The dream is almost over
and I want more of it.

Touched by desire to be with you
I never get enough
This dream it happens all the time
I did not make it up.





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Re: Dreams of You (Score: 1 )
by starstruck13 on Wednesday, February 22, 2012 (16:07:28)
your dream seemed so beautiful and peaceful, as so did your poem, you are a most gifted poem writer and i feel we may have gotten on the wrong foot when i first came here, so i must say am sorry, i didnt understand the ratings in here, but now i do so i hope you accept my apology, and that we can move forward into a divine friendship as most poets do. thank you for reading and commenting on my poem WHAT IS REAL, at the time of that writing i was having problems with what was real in my life my dreams seemed to be what i was doing in my life and my life seemed to be my dreams, but i guess you may not be able to understand what am saying and sometimes neither do i lol

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    Re: Dreams of You (Score: 1 )
    by Mr_Charles on Wednesday, February 22, 2012 (16:31:51)
    We are brothers you and I. Poets that share the spacial page on which we pen our thoughts. We are and always will be friends. Nothing to forgive. Thank you for reading and rating my poem. You always leave such heart felt comments. I appreciate you Starstruck. lol and Hugs!

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Re: Dreams of You (Score: 1 )
by flowergirl on Thursday, February 23, 2012 (02:58:09)
Just beautiful. Really like this alot. Great write. Not surprising of course. LOL Very Happy

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    Re: Dreams of You (Score: 1 )
    by Mr_Charles on Thursday, February 23, 2012 (06:26:56)
    Thank you Gail. I'm glad you liked it. thank you for reading. lol and Hugs!!!

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Re: Dreams of You (Score: 1 )
by sportytrackgirl on Sunday, February 26, 2012 (16:35:32)
I had just listened to "Just a Dream" by Nelly, and then read your poem, very similar attitude I believe, except as noted above, is very peaceful. I wish my dreams about my ex would be happy and peaceful, not nightmares. Great write!!

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    Re: Dreams of You (Score: 1 )
    by Mr_Charles on Monday, February 27, 2012 (02:44:55)
    I like that song too. You have a wonderful heart. Someone will notice and make you very happy. I appreciate you reading and commenting on my poems. You are awfully sweet. Hugs!

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