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by Mr_Charles

Well into the night. The darkness settles in.
I hold onto the joys of day
hoping they won’t end.

They slip away one by one. The feelings they are lost.
Dawn is tapping at my door
The last I’ll soon exhaust.

I have to hurry quickly. Save what I can keep.
Place them in my memories.
Before I fall asleep.

(Inspired by Starstruck13 from comments to my poem "Shade Me")

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Re: Memories (Score: 1 )
by flowergirl on Thursday, February 23, 2012 (02:02:40)
Oh, she will be thrilled when she reads this. I hope you have let her know this is here. She is a wonderful person and friend. Bless you for this. Very Happy 10 & hrt

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    Re: Memories (Score: 1 )
    by Mr_Charles on Thursday, February 23, 2012 (05:48:21)
    AS of this writing I have not told her yet. She has qualities like you in many ways. Her comments are wonderfully inspiring. I'm glad you like this one Gail. Hugs!!!

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Re: Memories (Score: 1 )
by sportytrackgirl on Sunday, February 26, 2012 (15:38:36)
I like the style of the first lines all being longer, don't know if you did it on purpose, but I like it. Its a great wright as well! Love your work Smile

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    Re: Memories (Score: 1 )
    by Mr_Charles on Monday, February 27, 2012 (01:41:54)
    Hi Shelby, sometimes I like to try different things. I'm glad you noticed and liked it. Thank you for the wonderful comments. Love and Hugs!!!

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Re: Memories (Score: 1 )
by starstruck13 on Friday, March 02, 2012 (18:49:15)
this is a wonderful poem and to think you was inspired to write this from a comment i made on one of your poem truly unique in every way, and it does sound just about like me at night putting away memories if at times they dont keep me awake, i feel i sleep less than a human being should i must come up with a poem for you and flower girl my friends you are just to kind to me, sometimes i feel i dont deserve such kindness but i utterly will take any and all you wish to share with me and i too with you both God bless you from the bottom of my heart!

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