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picture perfect

by poetrylover

walking hand in hand
across the wet sand
the crashing of the waves
fills our ears with sound so sweet
the setting sun
gives off a light
so romantic and amazing
that you start to kiss me
everything is picture perfect
and i hope nothing will change
that we'll stay the same
because the moments we have
are so amazing and wonderful
we always have a blast
and i always want this to last
for the rest of our lifetime
just like the perfect picture.





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Re: picture perfect (Score: 1 )
by lilbadu on Thursday, February 23, 2012 (11:57:37)
Great write.

lilbadu

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    Re: picture perfect (Score: 1 )
    by poetrylover on Thursday, February 23, 2012 (20:20:17)
    lilbadu, i really appreciate your comment. many thanks for it.
    sincerely,
    poetrylover aka Alanna

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Re: picture perfect (Score: 1 )
by maryanns on Thursday, February 23, 2012 (14:14:46)
Sweet, and I so enjoyed your conversational style.
Best wishes, Mary Ann

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    Re: picture perfect (Score: 1 )
    by poetrylover on Thursday, February 23, 2012 (20:24:50)
    thanks so much Mary Ann. i am glad that you liked the style of this poem. it makes me smile to know that people other then myself like my poetry. i am super glad i made this account last year, its completely changed my outlook on my own poetry. before i did this i never let ANYONE read my poems, i mean i barely had enough courage to read my poems aloud to my friends and family but this has made it a lot easier.
    thanks again,
    Alanna

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Re: picture perfect (Score: 1 )
by TygerTyger on Thursday, February 23, 2012 (15:10:37)
Beautiful. i could just picture it. a lovely romantic piece. perfect. a 10 and a heart. Well done. best wishes. Pete. LOL .

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    Re: picture perfect (Score: 1 )
    by poetrylover on Friday, February 24, 2012 (10:50:20)
    pete you are just too kind to me lol you comment on almost all of my poems and i am very greatful for that =) your comments are always so uplifting and sweet that it insipres me to keep on posting more of my poems on here.

    thanks ever so much,
    Alanna

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