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Poems - a bird sings

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a bird sings

by Upāsaka

ungraspable
unknowable
a bird sings
a father cries





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Re: a bird sings (Score: 1 )
by WHMechem on Sunday, February 26, 2012 (02:02:03)
I like it! It grabs my thought processes and causes me to ponder each line and their connection.

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    Re: a bird sings (Score: 1 )
    by Upāsaka on Tuesday, February 28, 2012 (07:50:13)
    Thanks. Your reading means more than words can say Smile

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Re: a bird sings (Score: 1 )
by butterflyzrfree on Sunday, February 26, 2012 (11:23:16)
Something about this one really grabbed me in the gut! One of your best, which, is saying a lot!!!!!

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    Re: a bird sings (Score: 1 )
    by Upāsaka on Tuesday, February 28, 2012 (07:51:06)
    Gail,

    Somehow we both seam to always respond to the emotional ones!

    Thanks!

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      Re: a bird sings (Score: 1 )
      by butterflyzrfree on Friday, March 09, 2012 (16:14:43)
      Those are the only good ones! Withought the schmaltz, though...

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Re: a bird sings (Score: 1 )
by Ozymandias on Tuesday, February 28, 2012 (05:48:17)
I agree with the others, it's very well constructed.

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    Re: a bird sings (Score: 1 )
    by Upāsaka on Tuesday, February 28, 2012 (07:53:15)
    Thank you for commenting on the construction. It started out as nearly a paragraph of prose and then got whittled down. Sometimes less is more. Cheers!

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