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Poems - Mothers ( A Palindrome)

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Mothers ( A Palindrome)

by Phoebe

-Mothers-
loving, warm
hugs big, twinkling eyes
words gentle, bringing calmness
settling feelings hurt, tears drying
smiles restoring;
nose running and cheeks damp wiping,
-all better-
wiping damp cheeks and running nose,
restoring smiles
drying tears, hurt feelings settling
calmness bringing, gentle words
eyes twinkling, big hugs
warm, loving
-Mothers-

~Phoebe~





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Re: Mothers ( A Palindrome) (Score: 1 )
by omegapaf on Saturday, March 10, 2012 (03:42:03)
lovely whipi.
i lost my mother the christmas before last...thanks - paora and houndish

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    Re: Mothers ( A Palindrome) (Score: 1 )
    by Phoebe on Saturday, March 10, 2012 (15:54:33)
    Not a day goes by when I don't miss my best friend in the whole world Paora.....I have tried many times to try this particular poetry style...just never found the right inspiration...until now...thanks u 2..Smile-Phoebe

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Re: Mothers ( A Palindrome) (Score: 1 )
by Essex68 on Saturday, March 10, 2012 (03:57:37)
This is a nice collection of motherly thoughts Phoebe

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    Re: Mothers ( A Palindrome) (Score: 1 )
    by Phoebe on Saturday, March 10, 2012 (15:55:12)
    Had great inspiration Wayne..thank you so much..Smile-Phoebe

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Re: Mothers ( A Palindrome) (Score: 1 )
by ossy on Saturday, March 10, 2012 (14:59:44)
The whole lots unveil the big picture of a Mother!
Nice one, Phoebe

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    Re: Mothers ( A Palindrome) (Score: 1 )
    by Phoebe on Saturday, March 10, 2012 (15:56:32)
    Mothers are to love always...thank you Ossy..Smile-Phoebe

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Re: Mothers ( A Palindrome) (Score: 1 )
by Zbird on Saturday, March 10, 2012 (17:25:19)
a very sweet poem! too bad all mothers aren't like yours.

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    Re: Mothers ( A Palindrome) (Score: 1 )
    by Phoebe on Sunday, March 11, 2012 (01:32:52)
    This is true Bonnie, always a negative to a positive across the multi faceted spectrum of humankind.....however, I like to think the positives outweigh the negatives...thanks for your comment..Smile-Phoebe

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Re: Mothers ( A Palindrome) (Score: 1 )
by WordLover on Saturday, March 10, 2012 (17:41:50)
Beautiful sentiments presented in a loving and caring way. Lovely poem.

Sandy

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    Re: Mothers ( A Palindrome) (Score: 1 )
    by Phoebe on Sunday, March 11, 2012 (01:34:21)
    Thanks Sandy, the challenge was the style and I always believe there's room for improvement - thank you for you lovely comment..Smile-Phoebe

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Re: Mothers ( A Palindrome) (Score: 1 )
by maryanns on Saturday, March 10, 2012 (20:37:42)
Lovely, truly well arranged this sweet piece of mother's love at work, drying tears and settling hurt feelings - ah it made me feel good to read it. I hope all is well with you, my friend. Cheers, Mary Ann xoxo

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    Re: Mothers ( A Palindrome) (Score: 1 )
    by Phoebe on Sunday, March 11, 2012 (01:36:40)
    Hi Mary Ann, I'm all good down here as we await the winter..in the meantime we have my most favourite season to go through Autumn...so looking forward to that..thank you for visiting and your great comments as usual..be well..Smile-Phoebe

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Re: Mothers ( A Palindrome) (Score: 1 )
by butterflyzrfree on Sunday, March 11, 2012 (08:38:35)
Pheobe--you did a beautiful job with this difficult form, and captured so much of the essence of a young mother!

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    Re: Mothers ( A Palindrome) (Score: 1 )
    by Phoebe on Sunday, March 11, 2012 (14:08:50)
    Thanks Gail, it was a challenge but that was the fun of it...and of course inspired by a lovely theme helped a lot..Smile-Phoebe

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Re: Mothers ( A Palindrome) (Score: 1 )
by jadia4708au on Sunday, March 11, 2012 (10:11:40)
lovely poem... read mine poem too.. my mother posted here

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    Re: Mothers ( A Palindrome) (Score: 1 )
    by Phoebe on Sunday, March 11, 2012 (14:10:29)
    Thank you very much Jadia and I shall, thank you for your comment..Smile-Phoebe

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Re: Mothers ( A Palindrome) (Score: 1 )
by BrokenWordsPoet on Sunday, March 11, 2012 (13:30:15)
We never stand alone in the memories of a mother we lost. I have many mothers in my life that I miss and each had a different personality, but all had a the same kind of loving qualities.

If we ever need our mother all we have to do is remember...

Those that still have theirs mothers they need to take the time to make all the good memories they can.

BWP... James... Nice poem...

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    Re: Mothers ( A Palindrome) (Score: 1 )
    by Phoebe on Sunday, March 11, 2012 (14:14:18)
    Absolutely true James, and thank you so much for commenting...I'm writing a book about my journey with my mother..about two women, two rivers, one passion...I've been working on it for almost 2 years but am pleased with its progress..inspired of course by my mother..Smile-Phoebe

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Re: Mothers ( A Palindrome) (Score: 1 )
by zoe_in_a_bubble on Sunday, March 11, 2012 (14:41:10)
this was so touching...and the form gave the feel of reciprocated devotion.
just beautiful

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    Re: Mothers ( A Palindrome) (Score: 1 )
    by Phoebe on Sunday, March 11, 2012 (19:06:30)
    Thank you Zoe but I need to thank first my mother and secondly the designer of this poetry form..a very enjoyable combination to work with..Smile-Phoebe

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Re: Mothers ( A Palindrome) (Score: 1 )
by liarbird on Wednesday, March 21, 2012 (20:35:09)
G'day Phoebe...
It's a genre I'm not familiar with Phoebe, but crikey, you have
connected the world that centres around a mother really well.
Thank you Phoebe.
Lindsay

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    Re: Mothers ( A Palindrome) (Score: 1 )
    by Phoebe on Thursday, March 22, 2012 (05:09:19)
    You're such a darling Lindsay, thank you..Smile-Phoebe

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