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Poems - WHO ARE YOU!!! HYPOCRITE
| | WHO ARE YOU!!! HYPOCRITEby dav.smith
Who are you to say;
what God another can worship
when there you falsely pray
as a full blown Hypocrite
Who are you to say;
what sex, another's partner can be
when in another bed, you do lay
not guiltless or free, but a Hypocrite
Who are you to say;
what we allow our own youth to do
when you have allowed yours to stray
as a Peddler and Pusher, your just a Hypocrite
Who are you to say;
what words we can speak
when you have none of your own
as we have seen, Hypocrite
Who are you to say;
what color people are, that we are allowed to mix with
when you come from a mixed background
as we see, Your just a HYPOCRITE
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Re: WHO ARE YOU!!! HYPOCRITE
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by Ozymandias on Monday, March 26, 2012 (05:06:34) |
Very impressive Dave, I can imagine this one being read aloud, it would really get an audience fired up!
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Re: WHO ARE YOU!!! HYPOCRITE
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by dav.smith on Monday, March 26, 2012 (05:26:02) |
Thanks Rory, the Political shit slinging up here is the motivation behind this piece. Before the election they were flinging it far and deep. Cheers dAVE
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Re: WHO ARE YOU!!! HYPOCRITE
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by dav.smith on Wednesday, March 28, 2012 (06:06:06) |
Rory, this is now up on my YouTube channel. Just go to YouTube and type in MrPoet67. I have several poems up on there. Would be good to get some comments and critique. Thanks dAVE
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Re: WHO ARE YOU!!! HYPOCRITE
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by nerdgirl on Monday, March 26, 2012 (05:55:37) |
This reminds me very much of my stepmother.. biggest hypocrite Ive ever met.. havent spoken a word to her since before I left VA and came to MO.
Great write... you tell em!
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Re: WHO ARE YOU!!! HYPOCRITE
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by dav.smith on Tuesday, March 27, 2012 (03:37:38) |
Nerdie, Big Hi and hug, Sorry you don't get on with your step-mom, Mines okay but has her moments I guess. I didn't think this poem as being as popular as it has become. thanks for commenting. Hugs dAVE
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Re: WHO ARE YOU!!! HYPOCRITE
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by Zbird on Monday, March 26, 2012 (08:10:14) |
and i can only add Amen to this! well thought out and well written!
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Re: WHO ARE YOU!!! HYPOCRITE
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by dav.smith on Tuesday, March 27, 2012 (03:38:23) |
Bonnie, thanks for the Amen, And the read, Hugs dAVE.
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Re: WHO ARE YOU!!! HYPOCRITE
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by maryanns on Monday, March 26, 2012 (18:25:18) |
It needed saying, and you've said it very well, Dave... sometimes poems like these are the most important ones to write! Cheers, my friend - Mary Ann
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Re: WHO ARE YOU!!! HYPOCRITE
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by dav.smith on Tuesday, March 27, 2012 (03:39:48) |
Mary Ann, Sooner or later one of us would of said it. So now it's out there. Thanks for commenting Hugs and wishes to you,dAVE
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Re: WHO ARE YOU!!! HYPOCRITE
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by liarbird on Monday, March 26, 2012 (20:12:57) |
G'day Dave...
Obviously the people of Queensland indicated on how to treat hypocrites.
Thank you Dave.
Lindsay
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Re: WHO ARE YOU!!! HYPOCRITE
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by dav.smith on Tuesday, March 27, 2012 (03:42:25) |
Lindsay, they spoke it loud and Clear. I went for the 'Greens", but know that Newman was going to walk it in. Looks like he will get 77 of the 89 seats. Lets see if a coalition party can run a state with out imploding. Cheers for the read and comment. dAVE
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Re: WHO ARE YOU!!! HYPOCRITE
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by Aravind on Monday, March 26, 2012 (23:52:12) |
This is a strong, powerful and emotional piece of poetry. You convey a strong message as well. Great work.
Fond Regards
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Re: WHO ARE YOU!!! HYPOCRITE
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by dav.smith on Tuesday, March 27, 2012 (03:43:47) |
Aravind, Thank you for your kind comment. Be well be safe my friend.dAVE
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Re: WHO ARE YOU!!! HYPOCRITE
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by silent_lotus on Tuesday, March 27, 2012 (00:36:24) |
dear Dav
interesting your choice of
What god
and not
Which god
i'll be back soon for another read
silent lotus
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Re: WHO ARE YOU!!! HYPOCRITE
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by dav.smith on Tuesday, March 27, 2012 (03:48:57) |
Lotus, I thank you for your kind comment, As for
What God and Which God,
It was to me one or the other, as each in this context would mean the same. Some may say...
'What God do you believe in?'
or say...
'Which God do you believe in?'..
To me they are equal in their quest for an answer.
Hope this helps clear it up. Best wishes my friend dAVE.
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Re: WHO ARE YOU!!! HYPOCRITE
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by WordLover on Tuesday, March 27, 2012 (20:59:20) |
Important words indeed and you have stated them so well! They remind me of a bunch of bobble heads all lined up - with nothing but jibbish coming out!
Sandy
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Re: WHO ARE YOU!!! HYPOCRITE
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by dav.smith on Wednesday, March 28, 2012 (02:41:09) |
Sandy, Thanks for your comment. dAVE
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Re: WHO ARE YOU!!! HYPOCRITE
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by thistleandweeds on Wednesday, March 28, 2012 (13:50:01) |
So much truth! Absolutely amazing
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Re: WHO ARE YOU!!! HYPOCRITE
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by dav.smith on Tuesday, April 03, 2012 (03:44:17) |
Yes and it seems to be hurting some people in some places I have posted. Thanks for the read and comment. dAVE
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Re: WHO ARE YOU!!! HYPOCRITE
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by wolfinwindow on Wednesday, March 28, 2012 (14:47:19) |
Very well written and planned out. The flow was excellent and the truth to the subject profound. Good job, poet.
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Re: WHO ARE YOU!!! HYPOCRITE
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by dav.smith on Tuesday, April 03, 2012 (03:47:13) |
You are way to kind in calling me a Poet..., But it had to be said and said it was. The wind can not move with out rustling some leaves, this has done that. Not on this site, but in other places I have shown it. Truth cuts the deepest they say. (More on the same sex Verse). Hugs to you my dear friend,dAVE
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