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Poems - placing the decimal point

placing the decimal point

by graphitegirl

and there were a thousand words
to say
a hundred thoughts
to empty
ten unwished coins
to toss
one beat of a heart
to feel

nothing
else matters

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Re: placing the decimal point (Score: 1 )
by doris on Saturday, March 31, 2012 (11:59:31)

Very clever piece. Well worked! to say, to empty, to toss, to feel- nothing else does matter.

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Re: placing the decimal point (Score: 1 )
by graphitegirl on Sunday, April 01, 2012 (12:05:28)

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Re: placing the decimal point (Score: 1 )
by Zbird on Saturday, March 31, 2012 (12:14:03)

wonderfully crafted and a deep and profound read

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Re: placing the decimal point (Score: 1 )
by graphitegirl on Sunday, April 01, 2012 (12:06:12)

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Re: placing the decimal point (Score: 1 )
by kylebank on Saturday, March 31, 2012 (16:27:04)

math was never my strong point, but this is like long division for the soul. or maybe multiplication. is there such a thing as long multiplication?

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Re: placing the decimal point (Score: 1 )
by graphitegirl on Sunday, April 01, 2012 (12:07:17)

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Re: placing the decimal point (Score: 1 )
by fogglethorpe on Tuesday, April 03, 2012 (16:08:29)

This is brilliant. A poem need not be lengthy to have depth.

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Re: placing the decimal point (Score: 1 )
by graphitegirl on Tuesday, April 03, 2012 (23:01:19)

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Re: placing the decimal point (Score: 1 )
by omegapaf on Monday, April 09, 2012 (16:09:46)

ten unwished coins can be said in ten lines michelle - paul and the decimal hound.

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Re: placing the decimal point (Score: 1 )
by graphitegirl on Tuesday, May 01, 2012 (21:43:36)

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Re: placing the decimal point (Score: 1 )
by butterflyzrfree on Monday, April 30, 2012 (00:09:03)

One of the most simple, and unassuming love poems to sneak up on me in a long time! I adore it, and Hught is right--perfect structure.

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Re: placing the decimal point (Score: 1 )
by graphitegirl on Tuesday, May 01, 2012 (21:44:27)

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