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The Fact

by kapilsharma

This poem is a fact and a short story of mine is tuned in it.
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December Five, Nineteen Ninety Four
For the first time I lay before;
My lovely Mom whom I love the most
Unaware of the 'Universe' infinite almost.

It was the 'Year' Nineteen Ninety Eight,
On May 21 she enjoyed the solemn height.
Leaving me below only half and three
When I was still an innocent 'Baby'.

Then, here comes 'Dark' once again,
The solemn event took away a great 'Man'.
It is 'Me' who was barely seven,
Seeking 'Peace' all-around but in vain.

Then I asked,"What if this's made of God?"
And realized after a second of thought-
Faith- 'a holy'- loony out of control
To judge is not my role
So, let the 'Past' decay in its 'Cold'
And start a life simple and unfold.





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Re: The Fact (Score: 1 )
by deepali on Monday, April 02, 2012 (07:50:30)
Oh..this makes me sad.
A nice poem, dear Kapil!
More strength to you with all the happiness,
D.

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    Re: The Fact (Score: 1 )
    by deepali on Monday, April 02, 2012 (07:52:26)
    what happened...i gave a ten and it shows..2 stars! Rolling Eyes

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      Re: The Fact (Score: 1 )
      by kapilsharma on Monday, April 02, 2012 (10:42:02)
      Thank you for your comment 2 or 10 it dosen't matter the thing that matter is how you liked this poem. Thanks a lot!!! Smile Smile Smile

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Re: The Fact (Score: 1 )
by Zbird on Monday, April 02, 2012 (08:08:46)
yes it is very sad and heartbreaking. I wonder why it rated a two as well. hopefully my 10 will increase the rating.

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    Re: The Fact (Score: 1 )
    by kapilsharma on Monday, April 02, 2012 (10:42:48)
    Thank You!!! Smile Smile Smile Smile

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Re: The Fact (Score: 1 )
by Frillycakes on Monday, April 02, 2012 (08:28:12)
Yes, it is really nice and it certainly deserves more than a 5, maybe a ten will compensate a little!

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    Re: The Fact (Score: 1 )
    by kapilsharma on Monday, April 02, 2012 (10:43:03)
    Thank You!!! Smile Smile Smile Smile

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Re: The Fact (Score: 1 )
by Essex68 on Monday, April 02, 2012 (09:08:55)
I think the coward with no voice has been on the loose again. This is a fine poem Kapil. I hope my ten will help do it justice.

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    Re: The Fact (Score: 1 )
    by kapilsharma on Monday, April 02, 2012 (10:43:18)
    Thank You!!! Smile Smile Smile Smile

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Re: The Fact (Score: 1 )
by starstruck13 on Monday, April 02, 2012 (13:27:04)
a sad and dear poem but all in all it made me kook up to heaven cause we all no God is in control a good poem by a good poet and thanks for sharing

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    Re: The Fact (Score: 1 )
    by kapilsharma on Tuesday, April 03, 2012 (04:08:39)
    Thank You starstruck13 your comments are always encouraging...

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Re: The Fact (Score: 1 )
by jadia4708au on Monday, April 02, 2012 (19:44:26)
To judge is not my role.... how rightly said..lovely poem

whatever may be the tragic events
whatever may be bad fall outs
we have only to feel sore
think nothing about it and explore.. this is life..

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    Re: The Fact (Score: 1 )
    by kapilsharma on Tuesday, April 03, 2012 (04:12:42)
    Thank you jadia4708au for taking time to read this one and commenting on it.

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Re: The Fact (Score: 1 )
by amara13 on Sunday, April 08, 2012 (10:56:46)
This is a great poem! You did an excellent job writing this piece. It's sad but sometimes that's how life is and to write and share your own story takes courage!... I love when poets actually tell their stories and that's what makes for an awesome and wonderful write! Smile

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    Re: The Fact (Score: 1 )
    by kapilsharma on Sunday, April 08, 2012 (11:32:49)
    Thank You very much

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