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Poems - Still Small Voice
| | Still Small Voiceby fogglethorpe
Don't want to run from the one I love
I'd rather set my mind on things above
Human nature says go astray
But it's in me and I can't get away
From your still small voice
Like a quiet urging
I have no choice
But the gentle purging
Of all the things
That keep us apart
When your still small voice
Thunders in my heart
Don't want to go where I don't belong
I'd rather choose the right and shun the wrong
Don't want to lose what's rightfully mine
Help me keep this branch on the vine
With your still small voice
Like a quiet urging
I have no choice
But the gentle purging
Of all the things
That keep us apart
When your still small voice
Thunders in my heart
Don't want to wander 'round aimlessly
Your holy radar is leading me
It's your still small voice
Like a quiet urging
I have no choice
But the gentle purging
Of all the things
That keep us apart
When your still small voice
Thunders in my heart
Copyright © 2012 by Hugh Lemma- All rights reserved
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Re: Still Small Voice
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by rondo on Friday, April 13, 2012 (21:36:18) |
works as a love poem or a spiritual...nice work Foggie...peace
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Re: Still Small Voice
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by fogglethorpe on Sunday, April 15, 2012 (11:58:31) |
Rondo..thank you my friend. I'm glad you see it that way.
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Re: Still Small Voice
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by deepali on Saturday, April 14, 2012 (02:24:19) |
Agree with Rondo, love and spiritual feels intermingles.
Mesmerizing!
warm wishes,
D.
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Re: Still Small Voice
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by fogglethorpe on Sunday, April 15, 2012 (11:59:24) |
D..a humble thanks. I think there is something romantic about one's relationship with God.
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Re: Still Small Voice
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by butterflyzrfree on Saturday, April 14, 2012 (23:51:20) |
This is a beauty, and so sweet and gentle. Love it.
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Re: Still Small Voice
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by fogglethorpe on Sunday, April 15, 2012 (12:00:01) |
Hi Gail..I'm so glad you liked it. Thank you.
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Re: Still Small Voice
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by KateBurnell on Sunday, April 15, 2012 (00:36:52) |
Thunders in my heart really strikes a cord with me. That still small voice was magnified in this piece. Good write. Thank you.
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Re: Still Small Voice
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by fogglethorpe on Sunday, April 15, 2012 (12:00:56) |
Hi Kate..every poet wants to affect the reader. I'm glad this worked for you.
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Re: Still Small Voice
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by wolfinwindow on Sunday, April 15, 2012 (08:50:41) |
I love the poem in general from the way it flows to the gentle rhyming scheme. This is beautifully constructed and a joy to read.
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Re: Still Small Voice
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by fogglethorpe on Sunday, April 15, 2012 (12:01:32) |
WIW..thanks for that great review. Best..-H
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Re: Still Small Voice
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by FuchsiaFestival! on Monday, June 18, 2012 (09:58:51) |
Beautiful...a love and spiritual song tossed into one.
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