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Reply to Last Message in my Inbox II

by ossy

When in bed beside your thought
I cuddled your poem to feel your warmth
and felt sweet words kissing my lips.
The rhythms and rhymes I smooch and stroked
exploring smooth curves between the lines.
Right there in my inbox you asked for more.
Who denies a queen as you her bidding?
Far be it from me such haunting thoughts,
when my heart jollies in wild ecstasy
many had hoped in their fantasies.
It is a long night for the two of us,
I hope you are set to tour the soul with me.




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Re: Reply to Last Message in my Inbox II (Score: 1 )
by wolfinwindow on Saturday, April 14, 2012 (08:05:11)
this is so sweet! I really liked I cuddled your poem to feel your warmth. what a extraordinary breathtaking line.

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    Re: Reply to Last Message in my Inbox II (Score: 1 )
    by ossy on Saturday, April 14, 2012 (11:52:38)
    Thank you so much for your inspiring comments.

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Re: Reply to Last Message in my Inbox II (Score: 1 )
by flowergirl on Saturday, April 14, 2012 (10:41:31)
Wow! Amazing and beautiful words. Heart and soul touching for sure. Love it!!! Very Happy 10 & hrt

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    Re: Reply to Last Message in my Inbox II (Score: 1 )
    by ossy on Saturday, April 14, 2012 (11:55:38)
    I'm glad you love it, and thanks for inspiring me. Warm regards, Ossy

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Re: Reply to Last Message in my Inbox II (Score: 1 )
by amara13 on Saturday, April 14, 2012 (13:14:08)
A beautiful and lovely piece. I especially like the last two lines..

'It is a long night for the two of us,
I hope you are set to tour the soul with me.'

Such a wonderful way of expressing emotion. I love the words used. Great write!

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    Re: Reply to Last Message in my Inbox II (Score: 1 )
    by ossy on Saturday, April 14, 2012 (13:48:42)
    Glad you liked it and most grateful for your comments. Flowergirl did inspire me on that one so to her I dedicate that piece. Hearty regards, Ossy

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Re: Reply to Last Message in my Inbox II (Score: 1 )
by butterflyzrfree on Saturday, April 14, 2012 (14:05:27)
A wonderful excursion through your clever fantasies, worming their way into sexual love experience. You make the turn at 'a queen' and then continue to discuss you lover. The last couplet is magnificent, you must have many girls after you! Gail

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    Re: Reply to Last Message in my Inbox II (Score: 1 )
    by ossy on Saturday, April 14, 2012 (15:16:38)
    Now you flatter me Gail or haven't heard about the fate of renown men of old, how the vain in numerous love birds robbed them of wise hearts. I pray to take lessons from others experiences. Though I'm out in the cold awaiting her to walk come the Isle with me, I'm all aware many would disguise and come but when she comes my heart would know her before eyes see her. Thanks for your comments, I appreciate them a lot.

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