True Lovers

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what a lovely tribute to that one emotion we all seek in our lives... true love... such a soft and beautiful poem.

Re: True Lovers (Score: 1 ) by ossy on Wednesday, April 18, 2012 (04:13:53)

Oh, thanks you so much for your inspiring comments...they brighten my day.


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There is such a purity in your write , written and flowed so well. A lovely read ~

Re: True Lovers (Score: 1 ) by ossy on Wednesday, April 18, 2012 (04:14:49)

Thanks a million kind one, I appreciate your inspiring comments.


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Full of grace, peacefullness, and love. Beautiful, as usual.

Re: True Lovers (Score: 1 ) by ossy on Wednesday, April 18, 2012 (04:16:26)

Thanks you so much gail, your sweet comment is as honey to the soul.


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Wow! Wonderfully constructed piece! Beautifully written and graceful in feel.

Osyy my friend...I think this piece only lacks meter (syllable count) see if this has better flow

will ever be close to their hearts 8
with only one thought wrapped up tight 8
love doth see the color of hearts 8
as white as snow always so bright 8
lives hope your stars would bring delight 8
upon the face of life in bloom 8
together purge your heart of gloom 8
get up to see the rizing moon 8
youre love may know and see no doom 8
if you would be a bride and groom 8

better flow ....hope this helps....your brother in poetry....rondo

Re: True Lovers (Score: 1 ) by ossy on Tuesday, April 17, 2012 (20:39:05)

Whole heartedly I adopted your classic touch. Thanks Ron, I'm so grateful. I've been having constraints writing and sending from my phone, screen advantage and features varieties I get from a laptop I don't have for know. But with GP so many's become right with me thus no matter the constraints I'd write hoping you or Rory would make it look better. Thanks for being exceptionally kind.


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Good meter! Rhyme, and lovely theme. I love this.

Re: True Lovers (Score: 1 ) by ossy on Saturday, April 21, 2012 (20:07:32)

My friend your words are kept and you're truly a dear friend. Thank you.


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