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Poems - Strings

Strings

by paperboat

two purple kites
drift away from each other -
empty sky fills ribcage

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Re: Strings (Score: 1 )
by Zbird on Tuesday, April 17, 2012 (08:11:28)

what a beautiful image this poem creates.

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Re: Strings (Score: 1 )
by paperboat on Tuesday, April 17, 2012 (09:20:37)

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Re: Strings (Score: 1 )
by kylebank on Wednesday, April 18, 2012 (10:59:27)

like a deep, quiet breath

beautiful poem, thanks for sharing!

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Re: Strings (Score: 1 )
by paperboat on Thursday, April 19, 2012 (17:20:25)

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Re: Strings (Score: 1 )
by deepali on Wednesday, April 18, 2012 (11:54:14)

I love it, too!
warm wishes,
D.

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Re: Strings (Score: 1 )
by paperboat on Thursday, April 19, 2012 (17:21:56)

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Re: Strings (Score: 1 )
by butterflyzrfree on Thursday, April 19, 2012 (16:39:46)

Love the image and the shock of the final word! Very nice job!

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Re: Strings (Score: 1 )
by paperboat on Thursday, April 19, 2012 (17:25:30)

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