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Candle’s wick

by MoZark

Twisty ties and wedding rings
and promises in the night,
love bends with the wind
as dawn seek the right.





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Re: Candle’s wick (Score: 1 )
by maryanns on Tuesday, April 17, 2012 (12:50:38)
So personal and yet quite whimsical, at least it seems to me...
like a flickering flame in a gentle breeze. Wishing you well, my friend.
Mary Ann

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    Re: Candle’s wick (Score: 1 )
    by MoZark on Tuesday, April 17, 2012 (20:24:38)
    Thanks for reading my little offering. I like your comment, it could very well be as you say, but not what I had in mind. Have a grand tomorrow…Jack

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Re: Candle’s wick (Score: 1 )
by omegapaf on Thursday, May 17, 2012 (13:43:18)
very good poem jack. i liked it a lot.

" i shall bend like a read in the wind " - dune.

- burning the candle at both ends - paul.

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    Re: Candle’s wick (Score: 1 )
    by MoZark on Friday, May 18, 2012 (06:43:15)
    Thanks Paul. Like the candles wick, life is to snort to abuse.
    Have a grand tomorrow…Jack

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Re: Candle’s wick (Score: 1 )
by Pujakins on Saturday, July 14, 2012 (11:44:51)
"Love bends with the wind" what a fine line that is! Words are the food of life. and what fun to feast! Hugs and Blessings, Tasha

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    Re: Candle’s wick (Score: 1 )
    by MoZark on Saturday, July 14, 2012 (18:45:57)
    It seems love is as easily undone as a twisty tie. What ever happened to forever?
    Thanks Tasha. Have a grand tomorrow…Jack

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