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Poems - Sonora
| | Sonoraby fogglethorpe
The cloud is growing
The dust is hiding the noon
I see it blowing
Sonora
No starlings flying
Coyotes lurk in the dunes
I hear them crying
Sonora
And I love the rain
'Cause it doesn't always come
And we wait in vain
'Til the posturing is done
And we see the same old sun
Sonora
The lightning's flashing
The thunder enters my room
I feel it crashing
Sonora
The palms are swaying
The leaves are playing their tune
I guess we're staying
Sonora
And I love the rain
'Cause it never lasts for long
And I can't explain
I don't miss it when it's gone
For a near eternal dawn
And I love the rain
'Cause it doesn't always come
And we wait in vain
'Til the posturing is done
And we see the same old sun
Sonora
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Re: Sonora
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by Pujakins on Sunday, April 22, 2012 (17:38:16) |
Thank you for this fine sharing, Hugh, I am impressed by the way the poem gathers force as it goes, and I appreciate the originality of the images as well. Excellent work. Warm Wishes, Tasha
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Re: Sonora
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by fogglethorpe on Monday, April 23, 2012 (14:37:15) |
Hi Tasha..thank you. I was thinking of a monsoon storm when I wrote this, so your comment is perfect.
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Re: Sonora
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by maryanns on Monday, April 23, 2012 (12:36:44) |
Ah, so expressive of blustery displays that affect the senses yet pass by quickly. Old Sonora, a much slower pace - but I suppose it, too has changed... although I hope not too much! Sonora, lovely lyrics Hugh. Cheers, Mary Ann
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Re: Sonora
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by fogglethorpe on Monday, April 23, 2012 (14:39:53) |
Hi Mary Ann..Summer is coming here in the Sonoran Desert, and I am bracing for it. The monsoon will arrive around late June or early July..its contradictions always intrigue me. It's good to see you..-H
love this. it's like slipping out onto the porch with a blanket and coffee first thing in the morning.
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Re: Sonora
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by fogglethorpe on Monday, April 23, 2012 (18:09:19) |
Chris..in June it will be in the 90s already by that time. You may want that coffee iced, my friend. But I loved your comment anyway. Best..-H
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Re: Sonora
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by WordLover on Monday, April 23, 2012 (18:38:26) |
dear Hugh, I agree wholeheartedly with Chris' comment - these warm and windy words made me feel like doing the same thing - and, by the way, I LOVE iced coffee!
Sandy
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Re: Sonora
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by fogglethorpe on Tuesday, April 24, 2012 (09:24:19) |
Sandy, so do I. Thanks for your generous comment. All the best..-H
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Re: Sonora
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by deepali on Tuesday, April 24, 2012 (08:06:27) |
a song of wait and the pain comes through...
a combination of senryu and tanka, is it?
warm wishes,
D.
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Re: Sonora
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by fogglethorpe on Tuesday, April 24, 2012 (09:26:55) |
D..you got it. The verses are haiku, the choruses tanka. I'm always glad to hear from you.
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Re: Sonora
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by paperboat on Tuesday, April 24, 2012 (11:45:50) |
Beautiful
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Re: Sonora
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by fogglethorpe on Tuesday, April 24, 2012 (13:33:52) |
Hello paperboat..I am glad you liked it, and grateful you took the time to say so.
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