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American Death Sentence

by Treagal

rain pours in the rolled-window; on a cracked, concave lens,
blood trickles out.

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Re: American Death Sentence (Score: 1 )
by alana on Monday, May 07, 2012 (09:43:36)
i hope the person whom the concave lens belongs to shot the c--- out of the blood mongers, where you been, Vader? what you doing all alone with Sadie? Sadie? who names a cutie like that Sadie? Does that make poor Sadie whine? Say would you like it if I called you something like Darkie, because you like dark stuff? ok by poetry i s'ppose, but does not mean you need to hide somewhere...what do you mean tata? ok, pata, bata, kata, gata, say do you know the story of golgatha?

whatever, you better kill some ku in there, i no play, when you no play cuckoo

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    Re: American Death Sentence (Score: 1 )
    by Treagal on Tuesday, May 08, 2012 (17:31:05)
    heh, thanks for the comment alana.
    the forums kind of bum me out lately, although I do still watch albeit silently.
    I'm kind of morbid, so that's why I named her Sadie... she's quite crazy.
    if you feel I need a new nickname, certainly and by all means.
    tata as in see ya later; which i am here and now I spose Smile. haha, golgatha, youre funny!

    can't force the ku to come out, must let it flow naturally like a river into the sea!

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