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Poems - Scanning

Scanning

by graphitegirl

If tears spill on
the barcode
and the splotch spreads
over
thick and thin lines,
how will we know
if we
have paid
the price for our
suffering?

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Re: Scanning (Score: 1 )
by omegapaf on Sunday, April 29, 2012 (15:53:47)

i guess we all get the odd bargain, but pay the ultimate price in the end michelle - my barcode has got a little faded over the years - your friend paul.

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Re: Scanning (Score: 1 )
by graphitegirl on Tuesday, May 01, 2012 (21:37:59)

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Re: Scanning (Score: 1 )
by WordLover on Monday, April 30, 2012 (07:04:25)

very very clever piece of writing! This short poem is so visual and descriptive in it's wording - also message is excellent.

Sandy

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Re: Scanning (Score: 1 )
by graphitegirl on Tuesday, May 01, 2012 (21:39:08)

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Re: Scanning (Score: 1 )
by doubt41 on Wednesday, May 02, 2012 (14:29:49)

brilliant and that is not an understanment i reread many times and came away just as amazed if not more everytime. strong message a 10 and a fav, thank you for the read.
much obliged, Daniel

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Re: Scanning (Score: 1 )
by graphitegirl on Wednesday, May 02, 2012 (21:33:45)

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