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Poems - train, part 2

train, part 2

by fogglethorpe

new boots on my feet,
jerky and pop in my bag-
I follow the tracks

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Re: train, part 2 (Score: 1 )
by wolfinwindow on Monday, April 30, 2012 (00:19:48)

excelent story of a vagabond life. all rolled up in a tiny space. Lovely

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Re: train, part 2 (Score: 1 )
by fogglethorpe on Monday, April 30, 2012 (10:16:28)

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Re: train, part 2 (Score: 1 )
by butterflyzrfree on Monday, April 30, 2012 (01:16:32)

The reason this is great is that for some reason, I was expecting more, yet none is really needed, is it?

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Re: train, part 2 (Score: 1 )
by fogglethorpe on Monday, April 30, 2012 (10:17:21)

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Re: train, part 2 (Score: 1 )
by Ozymandias on Monday, April 30, 2012 (23:51:41)

It's amazing how something so small can be complete in itself. I can almost feel the brash optimism of the kid.

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Re: train, part 2 (Score: 1 )
by fogglethorpe on Tuesday, May 01, 2012 (00:51:15)

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Re: train, part 2 (Score: 1 )
by Zbird on Tuesday, May 01, 2012 (08:23:37)

enjoyed this one immensely! wonderfully done!

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Re: train, part 2 (Score: 1 )
by fogglethorpe on Tuesday, May 01, 2012 (14:15:26)

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Re: train, part 2 (Score: 1 )
by omegapaf on Sunday, May 06, 2012 (16:42:14)

the train tracks go past the horizon taking perspective with them...reminded me of that movie " stand by me " - nicely done hugh - paul and the training hound.

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Re: train, part 2 (Score: 1 )
by fogglethorpe on Tuesday, May 08, 2012 (09:33:06)

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Re: train, part 2 (Score: 1 )
by zoe_in_a_bubble on Tuesday, May 15, 2012 (16:28:18)

What a perfect glimpse into innocence and wonder

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Re: train, part 2 (Score: 1 )
by fogglethorpe on Sunday, May 20, 2012 (10:29:04)

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