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Rap Trap

by rondo

Rap Trap

Oh snap! Imagine that
Brother stepped smack dab in a rap trap
Old bard, coming down hard
Who would believe that up his sleeve
He was holding an ace card
Chump got trumped and fell on his rump
Tried to be sly and “electric slide”
But faded like “the bump”

OH yeah! A poet got game
Rap cat didn’t know it and only got himself to blame
His jaws dropping like he’s out bra shopping
Smart ass old fart has his heart stopping

Go home junior let the adults talk
I was linking lines with thinking rhymes
Since before you could walk
Ok so you have more hair, I don’t care, not going there
What’s inside your head brother dread?
Take your back talk smack and walk
There is nothing real being said
You got the lines that are old and tired
Turn in the keys, clean out your desk, take a hike, cause your fired!
rondo





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Re: Rap Trap (Score: 1 )
by Phoebe on Tuesday, May 01, 2012 (15:28:47)
If I don't understand something I go find out..now I understand a little more about serious rap...
“The story of the rapper and the story of the hustler are like rap itself, two kinds of rhythm working together, having a conversation with each other, doing more together than they could do apart. It's been said that the thing that makes rap special, that makes it different both from pop music and from written poetry, is that it's built around two kinds of rhythm. The first kind of rhythm is the meter. In poetry, the meter is abstract, but in rap, the meter is something you literally hear: it's the beat. The beat in a song never stops, it never varies, a rap song is usually built bar by bar, four-beat measure by four-beat measure. It's like time itself, ticking off relentlessly in a rhythm that never varies and never stops.
But the beat is only one half of a rap song's rhythm. The other is the flow. When a rapper jumps on a beat, he adds his own rhythm. Sometimes you stay in the pocket of the beat and just let the rhymes land on the square so that the beat and flow become one. The flow isn't like time, it's like life. It's like a heartbeat or the way you breathe, it can jump, speed up, slow down, stop, or pound right through like a machine. If the beat is time, flow is what we do with that time, how we live through it. The beat is everywhere, but every life has to find its own flow.
Just like beats and flows work together, rapping and hustling, for me at least, live through each other. Those early raps were beautiful in their way and a whole generation of us felt represented for the first time when we heard them. But there's a reason the culture evolved beyond that playful, partying lyrical style. Even when we recognized the voices, and recognized the style, the content didn't always reflect the lives we were leading. There was a distance between what was becoming rap's signature style - the relentlessness, the swagger, the complex wordplay - and the substance of the songs. The culture had to go somewhere else to grow. It had to come home.” ― Jay-Z, Decoded

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    Re: Rap Trap (Score: 1 )
    by rondo on Tuesday, May 01, 2012 (18:36:11)
    wow articulate definition sweet one ...spot on intricate detail..as much as a definition of rap can be....its a form that captures the worlds interest as you need not be able to carry a tune and it is a rhythmatic debate and a civilized form of spar....thanks Pheobe for keen insight on the subject....xoxoxo

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