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Poems - In Sensitive

In Sensitive

by Phoebe

I wonder if we realise
How easily we hypnotise
That there are many in disguise
Who in among us roam

How often we are mesmerised
Occasionally plagerised
And when the stars fall from our eyes
Reality hits home

With many we can empathise
But seldom do we sympathise
More often we just criticise
Or write another poem!

~Phoebe~

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Re: In Sensitive (Score: 1 )
by omegapaf on Saturday, May 12, 2012 (16:19:12)

" dont plagiarize or take on loan. 'cos there is always someone with a big nose, who knows " - cemetery gates - the smiths.

hell, i don't mind a new poet stealing the odd line from me, but somebody stole the title and half my poem a few months ago....sheesh....it's a good job that i'm a nice guy - paora and the plagiarized puppy.

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Re: In Sensitive (Score: 1 )
by Phoebe on Saturday, May 12, 2012 (18:24:28)

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Re: In Sensitive (Score: 1 )
by omegapaf on Sunday, May 13, 2012 (12:56:37)

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Re: In Sensitive (Score: 1 )
by Kieran on Sunday, May 13, 2012 (14:40:48)

Not an easy rhyme sceme to manage. Stanzas one and two seem to call out the cons and deceivers among us. By the closing stanza, you suggest the cost of this: Caution and wariness on the part of caring people, who can either retaliate or put their feelings in writing. This nifty 12-liner is one of the best you've done!

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Re: In Sensitive (Score: 1 )
by Phoebe on Monday, May 14, 2012 (03:09:19)

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Re: In Sensitive (Score: 1 )
by rondo on Tuesday, May 15, 2012 (08:09:32)

only 3 stanza but worthy of mention still for its content...nice work xoxoxo

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Re: In Sensitive (Score: 1 )
by Phoebe on Wednesday, May 16, 2012 (00:36:57)

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Re: In Sensitive (Score: 1 )
by liarbird on Tuesday, May 15, 2012 (23:08:15)

G'day Phoebe...
My preference is your final line Phoebe. The better way to fight off insensitivity is to offer more of the same with a smile. Once again your poem flows nicely.
Thank you Phoebe
Lindsay

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Re: In Sensitive (Score: 1 )
by Phoebe on Wednesday, May 16, 2012 (15:12:23)

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Re: In Sensitive (Score: 1 )
by PTROCK4950 on Friday, May 18, 2012 (14:48:47)

So much went into this piece, great style and lines.

Cheers.

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Re: In Sensitive (Score: 1 )
by Phoebe on Friday, May 18, 2012 (23:46:35)

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Re: In Sensitive (Score: 1 )
by zoe_in_a_bubble on Friday, May 18, 2012 (16:09:09)

I thought the spelling was intentional like the playful title..hahha. I'd leave it Wink

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Re: In Sensitive (Score: 1 )
by Phoebe on Friday, May 18, 2012 (23:45:29)

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