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Poems - "Mine" Power
| | "Mine" Powerby Phoebe
Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind,
And therefore is winged Cupid painted blind.(Shakespeare)
How very apt a quote is that
to fit this century
Did Shakespeare know his words
back then would cross eternity
For here am I and there you are
and in our minds we meet.
I never dreamed something like this
could ever be so sweet
There is no life for me unless
you're close within my "view "
I lose all sense of time when I
am not in touch with you
You're everything I'll ever want
I need for you to stay
To "hold" me when I go to sleep
and "wake" with me each day.
You'll never know how long I've tried
To bring you to this place
Through lonely days and longer nights
I've waited in this space
Just hoping you would recognise
the one who wants you so
Through almost every thing I do
I've tried to let you know
My heart feels so much calmer now
My fears I've put aside
he's here, the one I've waited for
He's finally replied
The future is a mystery
and who knows what we'll find
but ‘til that day we make it real
His mind is mine - all mine!
~Phoebe~
March 2011
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Re: "Mine" Power
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by rondo on Tuesday, May 15, 2012 (07:57:20) |
a sweet ode so warm and inviting....its open address is all the more inviting for a reader and fan to crawl inside...great rhyme and flow,,,,none better at it than you....xoxoxo
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Re: "Mine" Power
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by Phoebe on Wednesday, May 16, 2012 (00:14:49) |
You have a warm and loving heart my darling - thank you..xoxoxo
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Re: "Mine" Power
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by liarbird on Tuesday, May 15, 2012 (22:43:04) |
Phoebe...
A wonderful write Phoebe...the flow and rhyme in your poem makes it a delight to read...in fact I am going to read this poem again.
Thank you Phoebe
Lindsay
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Re: "Mine" Power
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by Phoebe on Wednesday, May 16, 2012 (00:20:47) |
When you honour me with a visit Lindsay and leave your wonderful supporting comments I'm always so very happy.....I return many times to your poetry because they inspire on so many levels...in subject matter, in rhythm and rhyme, but most of all, for me it is because they are so filled with true life values like respect, love and the wisdom and passion of someone who was born with the gift of creating magic with words..thank you so much my dear friend... Phoebe
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Re: "Mine" Power
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by royst on Wednesday, May 16, 2012 (12:12:11) |
brilliant.
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Re: "Mine" Power
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by Phoebe on Wednesday, May 16, 2012 (14:47:58) |
The power in a single word can make or break a person's enjoyment of life...you have made my day Royst and I thank you very much Phoebe
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Re: "Mine" Power
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by PTROCK4950 on Friday, May 18, 2012 (14:59:35) |
Mark writting ability as "yours" as well.
Very nice write.
Cheers.
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Re: "Mine" Power
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by Phoebe on Friday, May 18, 2012 (17:07:04) |
Thank you Pete, awesome comments.. Phoebe
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