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Poems - A Dog At The Old Folk's Home - a rondeau redouble

A Dog At The Old Folk's Home - a rondeau redouble

by wolfinwindow

Thor was good the other day.
We took him to the home the old folk's know.
We didn't even ask him to lay,
somehow he just seemed to glow.
He's an old dog, he never seemed to grow.
He lay and wagged when we told him to stay.
When petted, he put his head low.
Thor was good the other day.
We took him to the old folk's home to play.
People petted him all in a row,
everyone said Thor was Okay.
We took him to the home the old folk's know
where he made quite a show,
where he felt at home all day.
He didn't bark or cause a row.
We didn't even ask him to lay.
He knows lay, shake, speak and stay
and if he has room he'll roll.
He did it his way.
Somehow he just seemed to glow.
Thor was good.

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Re: A Dog At The Old Folk's Home - a rondeau redouble (Score: 1 )
by Phoebe on Thursday, May 17, 2012 (02:49:47)

I had a beautiful dog named Thor once, got lost in the Queensland floods a couple of years ago - any poem about animals and dogs in particular are tops with me...Loved this Linda.. Smile

Phoebe

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Re: A Dog At The Old Folk's Home - a rondeau redoublexo (Score: 1 )
by wolfinwindow on Friday, May 18, 2012 (22:10:40)

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Re: A Dog At The Old Folk's Home - a rondeau redouble (Score: 1 )
by Zbird on Thursday, May 17, 2012 (13:33:19)

hey good job on the form and a fun poem! good Thor! maybe you should write one on how he washes the cat Smile

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Re: A Dog At The Old Folk's Home - a rondeau redouble (Score: 1 )
by wolfinwindow on Friday, May 18, 2012 (22:15:08)

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Re: A Dog At The Old Folk's Home - a rondeau redouble (Score: 1 )
by MoZark on Friday, May 18, 2012 (07:09:38)

This got me all fussy inside, started my day off right, now YOU have a grand tomorrow…Jack

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Re: A Dog At The Old Folk's Home - a rondeau redouble (Score: 1 )
by wolfinwindow on Friday, May 18, 2012 (22:19:46)

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Re: A Dog At The Old Folk's Home - a rondeau redouble (Score: 1 )
by omegapaf on Friday, May 18, 2012 (12:34:25)

good boy thor. good boy.
you can have one of jessicas chickeny nibbles.....when she isn't looking ha ha -shhhh, foxy.

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Re: A Dog At The Old Folk's Home - a rondeau redouble (Score: 1 )
by wolfinwindow on Friday, May 18, 2012 (22:27:45)

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Re: A Dog At The Old Folk's Home - a rondeau redouble (Score: 1 )
by liarbird on Thursday, May 24, 2012 (20:46:35)

G'day Linda...
I enjoyed the repetition Linda and a poem about a friendly dog brings us all together. The unconditional love is beauty.
Thank you Linda
Lindsay

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