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Poems - This Is About Me

This Is About Me

by Phoebe

I have this creative desire
To write a poem flaming with fire
I want it to be - a reflection of me
That on reading will truly inspire

The theme is important I know
But if nothing else, has to show
It is absolutely – a reflection of me
In each line of its poetic flow

I want all the words to reveal
The side I try hard to conceal
So it's easy to see – that reflection of me
Is one that has world wide appeal

Now that I've planned what to write
that masterpiece filled with delight
that shows totally - that reflection of me
I think I might call it a night.

~Phoebe~

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Re: This Is About Me (Score: 1 )
by Pujakins on Monday, May 21, 2012 (18:40:52)

Gorgeous! Woohoo!! I really enjoyed this poem, and the end was very clever too. An altogether excellent ten and a heart, my friend, Warmly, Tasha

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Re: This Is About Me (Score: 1 )
by Phoebe on Wednesday, May 23, 2012 (00:28:27)

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Re: This Is About Me (Score: 1 )
by rondo on Monday, May 21, 2012 (22:04:18)

the fire of Phoebe is all consuming
I shudder to think of this storm looming
Phoebes reflection is poetic perfection
and certain to leave a lasting impression
Very Happy

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Re: This Is About Me (Score: 1 )
by Phoebe on Wednesday, May 23, 2012 (05:33:39)

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Re: This Is About Me (Score: 1 )
by liarbird on Tuesday, May 22, 2012 (05:45:38)

G'day Phoebe...
A poem with verses written in a limmerick style certainly makes reciting bouncy. You've written this well Phoebe.
Thanks again
Lindsay

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Re: This Is About Me (Score: 1 )
by Phoebe on Wednesday, May 23, 2012 (05:23:31)

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Re: This Is About Me (Score: 1 )
by angeroseblue on Tuesday, May 22, 2012 (09:09:34)

a very creative soul you are

its a pleasure to read ur words Ms Phoebe Very Happy

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Re: This Is About Me (Score: 1 )
by Phoebe on Wednesday, May 23, 2012 (05:21:20)

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Re: This Is About Me (Score: 1 )
by omegapaf on Tuesday, May 22, 2012 (16:46:36)

sometimes we hold mirrors up in twilight - paora.

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Re: This Is About Me (Score: 1 )
by Phoebe on Wednesday, May 23, 2012 (05:22:29)

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Re: This Is About Me (Score: 1 )
by Zbird on Tuesday, May 22, 2012 (16:53:19)

and perhaps the words will transpire
the ones that will glow and inspire
to find that inner person you hide
when all the words combine and collide.

a lovely write my friend!

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Re: This Is About Me (Score: 1 )
by Phoebe on Wednesday, May 23, 2012 (05:35:32)

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